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标题

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文本相似度 92.7%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

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R2.2
具体原因
审稿人明确指出当前数据把手套尺码与参与者身份混杂,不能证明“尺寸自适应”。因此标题必须把 size-adaptive 收窄为只陈述已实现事实的 multi-size;冒号后补空格也是明确的排版修正。
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L39

HW-AVATAR:A Structure-Decoupled Liquid-Metal Stretchable Glove for Size-Adaptive Hand-Wrist Gesture Recognition

中文注释

HW-AVATAR:一款用于尺寸自适应手部—腕部手势识别的结构解耦液态金属可拉伸手套

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L39

HW-AVATAR: A Structure-Decoupled Liquid-Metal Stretchable Glove for Multi-Size Hand-Wrist Gesture Recognition

中文注释

HW-AVATAR:一款用于多尺码手部—腕部手势识别的结构解耦液态金属可拉伸手套

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摘要

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TE.2、R1.1、R1.2、R1.3、R1.5、R2.3
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审稿人 1 明确指出原稿每类仅两次重复不足,要求至少五次。扩展实验形成 2,400 个计划试次,质量控制后保留 2,373 个独立试次,并重新运行五折和 LOSO。1D-CNN 更新为 99.96% 和 94.99%,SVM-RBF 更新为 99.87% 和 94.06%,因此旧数值已失效,不能恢复。末句依据新增 DTW 和轮廓系数分析概括队列内结果,说明学习表征主要按手势而非尺码组织,并把结论限定在所测试条件下的 48 类识别与无需逐用户重新标定;摘要不再额外加入“同一参与者多尺码配对测试”的限制句。
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Response-ZH.docx 意见1.2–1.3(段落0050–0061);Response-EN.docx Comment 1.2–1.3;ALL.tex:498, 512, 601–602;Table II
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L49–L51

Robust hand-wrist kinematic sensing is a key enabler for immersive human-machine interaction (HMI), gesture recognition, and dexterous teleoperation. This paper presents HW-AVATAR, a 20-channel liquid-metal soft sensing glove that captures whole-hand motion through a structure-driven sensing architecture. The architecture integrates segmented strain-limiting islands on the fingers with an antagonistic wrist-sensor topology, geometrically constraining strain transfer so that finger and wrist DoFs are predominantly sensed by distinct channel groups. The sensing patch is a heterogeneous multilayer film based on 150 μm thermoplastic polyurethane (TPU), fabricated by scalable screen printing and thermal lamination, with an annular flexible printed circuit (FPC) interface and secondary polyimide encapsulation reinforcing the hard-soft transition. The hardware is co-designed with a lightweight recognition pipeline and evaluated on a 48-class gesture dataset from ten participants wearing four glove sizes (S/M/L/XL). The 1D-CNN achieves 98.75% within-subject accuracy and 85.86% under a strict Leave-One-Subject-Out (LOSO) protocol, while the RBF-kernel SVM reaches 97.51% and 85.14%, respectively, without user-specific recalibration. Complementary DTW and silhouette analyses suggest that the learned representation is more strongly organized by gesture label than by glove size, indicating that the proposed topology with size-graded substrates supports 48-class recognition without per-user recalibration under the tested conditions.

中文注释

鲁棒的手部—腕部运动学感知是沉浸式人机交互(HMI)、手势识别和灵巧遥操作的关键基础。本文提出 HW-AVATAR,一种采用结构驱动传感架构、可采集全手运动信息的 20 通道液态金属软体传感手套。该架构将手指上的分段限应变岛与腕部拮抗式传感拓扑相结合,通过几何方式约束应变传递,使手指和腕部自由度主要由不同的通道组感知。传感贴片是以 150 μm 热塑性聚氨酯(TPU)为基础的异质多层薄膜,通过可扩展的丝网印刷和热层压工艺制备,并采用环形柔性印刷电路(FPC)接口及二次聚酰亚胺封装来增强软硬过渡区域。硬件与轻量级识别流程协同设计,并在由 10 名参与者、四种手套尺码(S/M/L/XL)构成的 48 类手势数据集上进行评估。1D-CNN 的受试者内准确率为 98.75%,严格留一受试者法(LOSO)准确率为 85.86%;RBF 核 SVM 的对应准确率分别为 97.51% 和 85.14%,均无需针对用户重新标定。补充的 DTW 和轮廓系数分析表明,学习到的表征更主要地按手势标签而非手套尺码组织,说明在所测试条件下,所提出的拓扑与分尺码基底能够支持无需逐用户重新标定的 48 类识别。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L49–L51

Robust hand-wrist kinematic sensing is a key enabler for immersive human-machine interaction (HMI), gesture recognition, and dexterous teleoperation. This paper presents HW-AVATAR, a 20-channel liquid-metal soft sensing glove that captures whole-hand motion through a structure-driven sensing architecture. The architecture integrates segmented strain-limiting islands on the fingers with an antagonistic wrist-sensor topology, geometrically constraining strain transfer so that finger and wrist DoFs are predominantly sensed by distinct channel groups. The sensing patch is a heterogeneous multilayer film based on 150 μm thermoplastic polyurethane (TPU), fabricated by scalable screen printing and thermal lamination, with an annular flexible printed circuit (FPC) interface and secondary polyimide encapsulation reinforcing the hard-soft transition. The hardware is co-designed with a lightweight recognition pipeline and evaluated using a 48-class gesture dataset collected from ten participants, each performing five independent trials per gesture while wearing one of four glove sizes (S/M/L/XL). The 1D-CNN achieves 99.96% trial-level five-fold accuracy and 94.99% under a strict Leave-One-Subject-Out (LOSO) protocol, while the RBF-kernel SVM reaches 99.87% and 94.06%, respectively, without user-specific recalibration. Complementary DTW and silhouette analyses suggest that the learned representation is more strongly organized by gesture label than by glove size, indicating that the proposed topology with multi-size substrates supports 48-class recognition without per-user recalibration under the tested conditions.

中文注释

鲁棒的手部—腕部运动学感知是沉浸式人机交互(HMI)、手势识别和灵巧遥操作的关键基础。本文提出 HW-AVATAR,一种采用结构驱动传感架构、可采集全手运动信息的 20 通道液态金属软体传感手套。该架构将手指上的分段限应变岛与腕部拮抗式传感拓扑相结合,通过几何方式约束应变传递,使手指和腕部自由度主要由不同的通道组感知。传感贴片是以 150 μm 热塑性聚氨酯(TPU)为基础的异质多层薄膜,通过可扩展的丝网印刷和热层压工艺制备,并采用环形柔性印刷电路(FPC)接口及二次聚酰亚胺封装来增强软硬过渡区域。硬件与轻量级识别流程协同设计,并使用一个由 10 名参与者采集的 48 类手势数据集进行评估;每名参与者佩戴四种尺码之一,并对每类手势完成 5 次独立试次。1D-CNN 的试次级五折准确率为 99.96%,严格 LOSO 准确率为 94.99%;RBF 核 SVM 的对应准确率分别为 99.87% 和 94.06%,均无需针对用户重新标定。补充的 DTW 和轮廓系数分析表明,学习到的表征更主要地按手势标签而非手套尺码组织,说明在所测试条件下,所提出的拓扑与多尺码基底能够支持无需逐用户重新标定的 48 类识别。

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文本相似度 86.5%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

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原因类别
收窄证据边界;能力边界与术语修正
审稿意见
TE.3、R2.2、R2.5
具体原因
motion capture 容易被理解为连续关节角或三维姿态重建,而本文只验证48类离散分类;kinematic decoupling 也被统一为与实际硬件机制相符的 structural decoupling。这是审稿人直接要求的能力边界收窄。
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Response-ZH.docx 意见2.5(0117–0122)及 TE.3(0032–0038);RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md:63–75, 237–245;ALL.tex:64–65
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L64–L67

stretchable sensor, liquid metal, kinematic decoupling, gesture recognition, human-machine interaction (HMI), hand-wrist motion capture, wearable electronics.

中文注释

可拉伸传感器,液态金属,运动学解耦,手势识别,人机交互(HMI),手部—腕部动作捕捉,可穿戴电子器件。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L64–L67

stretchable sensor, liquid metal, structural decoupling, gesture recognition, human-machine interaction (HMI), wearable hand-wrist sensing, wearable electronics.

中文注释

可拉伸传感器,液态金属,结构解耦,手势识别,人机交互(HMI),可穿戴手部—腕部感知,可穿戴电子器件。

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Introduction

Introduction

中文:引言

文本相似度 49.0%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

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TE.1、R2.1
具体原因
技术编辑和审稿人2都明确指出引言过长、通用背景过多且文献比较不够聚焦。当前版本删去与核心问题距离较远的应用铺陈,保留三类技术路线及软手套的直接优势,正面回应了“缩短并聚焦引言”的要求。
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Response-ZH.docx TE.1(0020–0025)和意见2.1(0093–0098);RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md:39–49, 185–195
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L82

High-fidelity hand-wrist motion capture is a key requirement for natural human-machine interaction (HMI), gesture recognition, and dexterous teleoperation [1, 2, kwonEncryptedCoordinateTransformation2023]. In recent years, multiple technical routes, including vision-based tracking [3, 4, 5], inertial wearables [6], and soft sensor gloves [7, 8], have enabled real-time decoding of complex hand motions. Among these, soft sensor gloves are particularly appealing for long-duration wearable use, owing to their compliance with the skin, immunity to occlusion, and freedom from line-of-sight constraints. Vision-based systems and rigid wearable devices each offer advantages in specific application settings. However, when natural, unobtrusive whole-hand interaction is required in complex HMI scenarios, soft sensor gloves provide a particularly suitable solution [9, popovPortableExoskeletonGlove2017c].

中文注释

高保真手部—腕部动作捕捉是自然人机交互(HMI)、手势识别和灵巧遥操作的重要需求[引文]。近年来,视觉跟踪[引文]、惯性可穿戴设备[引文]和软体传感手套[引文]等多种技术路线实现了复杂手部运动的实时解码。其中,软体传感手套因贴合皮肤、不受遮挡影响且不依赖视线,尤其适合长时间穿戴。视觉系统和刚性可穿戴设备在特定应用环境中各有优势;然而,在复杂 HMI 场景中需要自然、无干扰的全手交互时,软体传感手套是一种尤其合适的方案[引文]。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L82

Wearable sensing of hand–wrist motion is important for natural human–machine interaction and gesture recognition [1, 2]. Vision-based tracking [3, 4, 5], inertial wearables [6], and soft sensor gloves [7, 8] provide complementary solutions. Soft sensor gloves are particularly attractive for long-duration wearable use because they conform to the skin and do not require an external line of sight [9].

中文注释

手部—腕部运动的可穿戴感知对自然人机交互和手势识别十分重要[引文]。视觉跟踪[引文]、惯性可穿戴设备[引文]和软体传感手套[引文]提供了互补的解决方案。软体传感手套贴合皮肤且不依赖外部视线,因此尤其适合长时间穿戴[引文]。

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Introduction

Introduction

中文:引言

当前版已恢复投稿版的无作者姓名写法,并保留经核实的技术内容与任务边界。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

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TE.1、TE.3、R2.1、R2.5
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技术编辑和审稿人要求引言更聚焦,并要求明确本文与连续姿态估计工作的区别。当前版本继续保留五项研究各自的技术内容和准确引文,但恢复 2026-04-25 投稿版的组织方式,不在正文中逐一写作者姓名,而是直接说明“什么系统采用了什么方法、解决了什么问题”,并在句后放置对应引文。这样既能保留详细文献调研和准确的引用关系,也能减少人名带来的冗长,使段落更接近原投稿版。旧稿中缺少直接证据的算法复杂度泛化批评仍不恢复。
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Response-ZH.docx TE.1(0020–0025)、TE.3(0032–0036)、意见2.5(0117–0122);ALL.tex:84
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L84

The application of soft sensor gloves to joint-level kinematic capture is challenging, given that inter-joint coupling and skin-motion artifacts are difficult to decouple at the signal source. A variety of sensing modalities have been developed to address this difficulty. A stretch-sensing soft glove was developed in [10], where a deep neural regressor was employed to recover hand poses from inherently coupled capacitive signals. A fiber-optic glove combined with machine-learning decoding was presented in [11]. Similar algorithmic compensation strategies were adopted in [12, 13, 14], where heterogeneous coupled signals were handled through multi-sensor fusion or time-frequency feature engineering[kimDeepFullbodyMotion2019a]. While the feasibility of soft-sensor-based hand tracking is demonstrated by the above methods, their implementation remains constrained by an algorithm-dominant decoupling paradigm. Since the physical signal itself is not isolated, residual crosstalk must be compensated by increasingly complex regression models, which inflates computational overhead and undermines interpretability and edge deployability.

中文注释

软体传感手套用于关节级运动学采集时面临困难,因为关节间耦合和皮肤运动伪差很难在信号源处解耦。为解决这一问题,研究者开发了多种传感方式。[引文]开发了一种拉伸感知软手套,并使用深度神经回归器从内在耦合的电容信号中恢复手部姿态;[引文]提出了结合机器学习解码的光纤手套;[引文]则采用多传感器融合或时频特征工程来处理异质耦合信号[引文]。上述方法证明了基于软传感器进行手部跟踪的可行性,但其实现仍受以算法为主的解耦范式限制。由于物理信号本身没有被隔离,残余串扰需要由越来越复杂的回归模型补偿,从而增加计算开销并削弱可解释性和边缘部署能力。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L84

The application of soft sensor gloves to joint-level kinematic capture remains challenging because inter-joint coupling and skin-motion artifacts are difficult to separate at the signal source. A stretch-sensing soft glove was developed to recover hand poses from coupled capacitive signals through deep neural regression [10]. A D-shaped plastic-optical-fiber glove was developed for gesture and grasp recognition using SVM and feedforward-neural-network decoding [11]. Other systems combined distributed fabric sensors with a lightweight multilayer perceptron [12], encoded 16-DoF flex-sensor sequences as Gramian angular field images [13], or used multimodal fusion [14]. These studies demonstrate both discrete recognition and continuous pose-estimation routes. In contrast, the present work controls strain transfer structurally and evaluates the resulting signals for 48-class discrete hand–wrist gesture recognition. Continuous joint-angle or three-dimensional pose reconstruction is outside the validated scope.

中文注释

软体传感手套用于关节级运动学采集时仍面临困难,因为关节间耦合和皮肤运动伪差很难在信号源处区分。一种拉伸感知软手套通过深度神经回归,从耦合的电容信号中恢复手部姿态[10]。一种 D 形塑料光纤手套采用 SVM 和前馈神经网络解码,用于识别手势与抓握动作[11]。其他系统则采用分布式织物传感器与轻量级多层感知机[12]、将 16 自由度屈曲传感序列编码为 Gramian 角场图像[13],或采用多模态融合[14]。这些研究涵盖离散识别和连续姿态估计两类路线。相比之下,本文通过结构控制应变传递,并将所得信号用于 48 类离散手部—腕部手势识别。连续关节角或三维姿态重建不在本文已经验证的范围内。

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Introduction

Introduction

中文:引言

已删除不必要的尺码不变性判断,正文只保留研究需求和参与者隔离评价。

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保留主体内容,删除末尾限制句
原因类别
表达聚焦;限制说明保留在审稿回复
审稿意见
TE.1、R1.3、R2.1、R2.2
具体原因
审稿意见2.2所涉及的证据边界已在回复信中逐项说明。论文正文在此处只需提出多尺码队列中的参与者隔离评价需求,不必再增加“不能把多尺码视为尺码不变性证据”的判断,以免打断研究空缺与本文方案之间的衔接。
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Response-ZH.docx 意见2.2(0099–0104);RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md:197–207;ALL.tex:100–101, 619, 624
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L100–L101

Cross-user deployment further complicates the picture: variations in hand size and donning tightness cause the glove to deviate from its calibrated baseline, undermining consistent performance across users [20]. Therefore, it is necessary to jointly leverage physically clean signals and a size-adaptive hardware topology to suppress the influence of anthropometric variations. A calibration-intensive multimodal fusion scheme was introduced in [14] to adapt to different users, while a learning-based personalization framework was adopted in [19]. Commercial platforms such as MANUS Metagloves Pro and StretchSense offer multiple sizes, but they are typically validated only under proprietary recognition pipelines, leaving the intrinsic scale-invariance of their raw signals unquantified. In spite of the fact that cross-user variations can be mitigated via sophisticated algorithms or size discretization, the effectiveness of these approaches is hindered by the reliance on complex models, the absence of physical-level decoupling, and the lack of systematic validation that a single platform can simultaneously deliver scale-invariant raw features and support lightweight algorithmic deployment across diverse hand sizes.

中文注释

跨用户部署使问题更加复杂:手部尺寸和穿戴松紧度的差异会使手套偏离标定基线,从而削弱跨用户性能的一致性[引文]。因此,需要同时利用物理上干净的信号和尺寸自适应硬件拓扑来抑制人体测量差异的影响。[引文]提出了需要较多标定的多模态融合方案以适应不同用户,[引文]则采用基于学习的个性化框架。MANUS Metagloves Pro 和 StretchSense 等商业平台提供多种尺码,但通常只在专有识别流程下验证,其原始信号内在的尺度不变性未得到量化。尽管复杂算法或尺寸离散化可以缓解跨用户差异,这些方案仍受复杂模型依赖、缺少物理层解耦,以及缺少系统验证等问题限制;尚未证明单一平台可在不同手型下同时提供尺度不变的原始特征并支持轻量级算法部署。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L100–L101

Cross-user deployment further complicates the picture: variations in hand size and donning tightness cause the glove to deviate from its calibrated baseline, undermining consistent performance across users [20]. Multi-size substrates provide a practical way to improve fit, while calibration-intensive multimodal fusion and learning-based personalization have also been used to accommodate user variability [14, 19]. Commercial platforms such as MANUS Metagloves Pro and StretchSense similarly offer multiple physical sizes, but public evaluations rarely separate glove-size effects from participant-specific effects. A remaining need is therefore to evaluate whether structurally decoupled sensing hardware and a unified lightweight recognition pipeline retain useful discriminative performance in a participant cohort spanning multiple glove sizes using subject-disjoint protocols.

中文注释

跨用户部署使问题更加复杂:手部尺寸和穿戴松紧度的差异会使手套偏离标定基线,从而削弱跨用户性能的一致性[引文]。多尺码基底是改善贴合度的一种实用途径,需要较多标定的多模态融合和基于学习的个性化方法也被用于适应用户差异[引文]。MANUS Metagloves Pro 和 StretchSense 等商业平台同样提供多种物理尺码,但公开评估通常没有把手套尺码效应与参与者个体效应分开。因此,仍需使用参与者隔离协议,检验结构解耦传感硬件和统一的轻量级识别流程能否在覆盖多种手套尺码的参与者队列中保持有用的判别性能。

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Introduction

Introduction

中文:引言

已恢复投稿版“局限总结→方案提出”的组织方式,仅更新评价术语。

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原因类别
引言逻辑恢复;评价术语精确化
审稿意见
TE.1、R2.1
具体原因
投稿版先明确总结以算法为主的解耦、超薄制造与软硬集成难以兼顾,以及评价不足三项痛点,再引出 HW-AVATAR,逻辑更完整。当前版本恢复这一结构,只把含糊的 cross-size validation 更新为与实际实验一致的 participant-disjoint evaluation。
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Response-ZH.docx TE.1(0020–0023)和意见2.1(0093–0096);ALL.tex:109
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98%
大幅改写

2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L115

Taken together, the algorithm-dominated decoupling paradigm, the difficulty of jointly achieving an ultrathin form factor with scalable fabrication and reinforced hard-soft integration, and the lack of systematic cross-size validation motivate a different design philosophy. To this end, we propose HW-AVATAR, a structure-driven soft sensing glove for hand-wrist gesture recognition with reduced inter-channel coupling. The primary contributions of this work are:

中文注释

综合来看,以算法为主的解耦范式、难以同时实现超薄外形与可扩展制造和增强软硬集成,以及缺少系统性的跨尺码验证,共同推动了另一种设计思路。为此,我们提出 HW-AVATAR,一种用于手部—腕部手势识别、可减少通道间耦合的结构驱动软体传感手套。本文的主要贡献如下:

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L109

Taken together, the algorithm-dominated decoupling paradigm, the difficulty of jointly achieving an ultrathin form factor with scalable fabrication and reinforced hard–soft integration, and the lack of systematic participant-disjoint evaluation motivate a different design philosophy. To this end, we propose HW-AVATAR, a structure-driven soft sensing glove for hand–wrist gesture recognition with reduced inter-channel coupling. The primary contributions of this work are:

中文注释

综合来看,以算法为主的解耦范式、难以同时实现超薄外形与可扩展制造和增强软硬集成,以及缺少系统性的参与者隔离评价,共同推动了另一种设计思路。为此,我们提出 HW-AVATAR,一种用于手部—腕部手势识别、可减少通道间耦合的结构驱动软体传感手套。本文的主要贡献如下:

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Introduction

Introduction

中文:引言

已恢复投稿版耐久性表述,并删除正文中的总体寿命解释。

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恢复投稿版耐久性表述
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贡献表述聚焦;限制信息留在回复与图表
审稿意见
R2.4、R3.4、R3.5
具体原因
试样数量和测试边界已在审稿回复及对应图表中说明,贡献条目不必重复加入“总体寿命估计”的解释。正文恢复为直接报告耐久性结果,即软硬接口承受超过9,000次循环应变事件而未发生开路。
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Response-ZH.docx 意见2.4(0111–0116)及意见3.5(0189–0194);ALL.tex:114, 183–187, 304
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L120

• An ultrathin heterogeneous multilayer system based on 150-μm TPU is developed through scalable screen printing and thermal lamination, together with a reinforced FPC-based interconnection and anchoring interface, providing a hard-soft interface that withstood more than 9,000 cyclic strain events in fatigue testing without open-circuit failure.

中文注释

• 开发了一种以 150 μm TPU 为基础的超薄异质多层系统,通过可扩展的丝网印刷和热层压制备,并配有增强型 FPC 互连与锚定接口;该软硬接口在疲劳测试中承受超过 9,000 次循环应变事件而未发生开路。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L114

• An ultrathin heterogeneous multilayer system with a 150 μm TPU sensing stack is developed through scalable screen printing and thermal lamination, together with a reinforced FPC-based interconnection and anchoring interface, providing a hard–soft interface that withstood more than 9,000 cyclic strain events without open-circuit failure.

中文注释

• 开发了一种采用 150 μm TPU 传感叠层的超薄异质多层系统,通过可扩展的丝网印刷和热层压制备,并配有增强型 FPC 互连与锚定接口;该软硬接口承受超过 9,000 次循环应变事件而未发生开路。

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Introduction

Introduction

中文:引言

已按投稿版层次补充轻量级分类器、未见参与者 LOSO 结果和特征空间分析。

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TE.2、R1.1、R1.2、R1.3、R1.5、R2.2
具体原因
审稿人1要求增加到每人每类至少五次并重新评估泛化,因此旧数值必须更新。当前条目沿用投稿版的叙述层次,先报告轻量级1D-CNN的最高五折准确率99.96%,再解释严格LOSO即对完全未见参与者的评价,并报告94.99%准确率,最后补充特征空间分析结果。
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Response-ZH.docx 意见1.2–1.3(0050–0061)、意见2.2(0099–0104);ALL.tex:116, 498, 512, 601, 624
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100%
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L122

• The hardware-software co-design is validated on a 48-class gesture dataset collected from ten participants wearing four glove sizes, where lightweight classifiers (1D-CNN, SVM, and KNN) achieve within-subject accuracies of 98.75%, 97.51%, and 92.83%, respectively. Under a strict Leave-One-Subject-Out protocol, the 1D-CNN retains 85.86% accuracy on fully unseen participants. Feature-space analyses further suggest that, within the tested four-size cohort, the learned representation is more strongly organized by gesture identity than by glove size, indicating limited size-dependent feature drift without user-specific recalibration.

中文注释

• 在由 10 名参与者、四种手套尺码构成的 48 类手势数据集上验证了软硬件协同设计。轻量级分类器 1D-CNN、SVM 和 KNN 的受试者内准确率分别为 98.75%、97.51% 和 92.83%。在严格 LOSO 协议下,1D-CNN 对完全未见参与者仍达到 85.86% 准确率。特征空间分析进一步表明,在所测试的四尺码队列中,学习表征更多地由手势身份而非手套尺码组织,说明无需逐用户重新标定时,尺码相关特征漂移有限。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L116

• The hardware–software co-design is evaluated on a 48-class dataset collected from ten participants, with five independent trials per gesture across four glove sizes. The best-performing lightweight classifier, 1D-CNN, achieves 99.96% trial-level five-fold accuracy. Under a strict Leave-One-Subject-Out (LOSO) protocol, it retains 94.99% accuracy on fully unseen participants. Feature-space analyses further show that the learned representation is organized mainly by gesture identity rather than glove size, indicating limited size-related feature drift without user-specific recalibration.

中文注释

• 软硬件协同设计在一个由 10 名参与者、四种手套尺码构成的 48 类数据集上进行评估,每类手势包含 5 次独立试次。表现最好的轻量级分类器 1D-CNN 取得了 99.96% 的试次级五折准确率。在严格的留一受试者法(LOSO)协议下,它对完全未见参与者仍保持 94.99% 的准确率。特征空间分析进一步表明,学习到的表征主要按手势身份而非手套尺码组织,说明无需逐用户重新标定时,尺码相关特征漂移有限。

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Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System

Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System / System Architecture, Sensing Principle, and Monolithic Integration

中文:集成传感系统的设计与制造 / 系统架构、传感原理与单片集成

multi-size 与论文题目统一,替代 size-graded

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R2.2
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论文题目已采用 multi-size,该处继续使用 size-graded 会造成同一概念出现不同名称。当前统一写为 multi-size low-stretch glove substrates,与题目和全文主术语一致。
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Response-ZH.docx 意见2.2(0099–0104);ALL.tex:123
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100%
局部改写

2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L129

The HW-AVATAR platform consists of four wearable modules, as shown in the 文内交叉引用(fig:system_overview): (1) multi-sized low-stretch glove substrates (S/M/L/XL), (2) a monolithic liquid-metal stretchable sensing patch, (3) a wrist-mounted data acquisition (DAQ) unit, and (4) a hook-and-loop armband. The glove provides the conformal substrate, the stretchable patch transduces joint deformation into resistance changes, and the wrist-mounted DAQ unit performs signal conditioning, digitization, and wireless transmission to the host.

中文注释

如[图:系统概览]所示,HW-AVATAR 平台由四个可穿戴模块组成:(1)多种尺码的低拉伸手套基底(S/M/L/XL);(2)一体式液态金属可拉伸传感贴片;(3)腕戴式数据采集(DAQ)单元;(4)魔术贴臂带。手套提供贴合基底,可拉伸贴片把关节形变转换为电阻变化,腕戴 DAQ 单元完成信号调理、数字化和向主机的无线传输。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L123

The HW-AVATAR platform consists of four wearable modules, as shown in the 文内交叉引用(fig:system_overview): (1) multi-size low-stretch glove substrates (S/M/L/XL), (2) a monolithic liquid-metal stretchable sensing patch, (3) a wrist-mounted data acquisition (DAQ) unit, and (4) a hook-and-loop armband. The glove provides the conformal substrate, the stretchable patch transduces joint deformation into resistance changes, and the wrist-mounted DAQ unit performs signal conditioning, digitization, and wireless transmission to the host.

中文注释

如[图:系统概览]所示,HW-AVATAR 平台由四个可穿戴模块组成:(1)多尺码低拉伸手套基底(S/M/L/XL);(2)一体式液态金属可拉伸传感贴片;(3)腕戴式数据采集(DAQ)单元;(4)魔术贴臂带。手套提供贴合基底,可拉伸贴片把关节形变转换为电阻变化,腕戴 DAQ 单元完成信号调理、数字化和向主机的无线传输。

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Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System

Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System / System Architecture, Sensing Principle, and Monolithic Integration

中文:集成传感系统的设计与制造 / 系统架构、传感原理与单片集成

已恢复投稿版传感原理表述,不再额外强调连续关节角恢复。

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审稿意见
TE.3、R2.5
具体原因
“通过连续测量电阻变化推断手指和腕部运动”是对传感原理的正常描述,与论文题目中的手势识别任务一致,并不需要在此处额外加入“不是连续关节角恢复”的否定说明。相关任务边界已在审稿回复中回应。
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Response-ZH.docx TE.3(0032–0036)和意见2.5(0117–0122);ALL.tex:125
审计置信度
100%
局部改写

2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L131

The basic sensing principle is strain-resistance transduction. During hand motion, joint rotation induces local stretching of the sensing patch. This deformation changes the geometry of the embedded liquid-metal traces and thereby modulates their electrical resistance. By continuously measuring these resistance variations, the system infers the underlying finger and wrist motions. In the present design, 15 channels are allocated to finger-motion measurement, and 5 channels form a distributed wrist–forearm array: 3 channels (S₁–S₃) placed on the dorsal wrist sense flexion/extension and radial/ulnar deviation, while 2 channels (S₄, S₅) are placed on the forearm as an independent module to sense pronation/supination. Of these 20 channels, 18 (all 15 finger channels together with S₁–S₃) are integrated into a single monolithic sensing patch, and the forearm pair (S₄, S₅) forms a separate thin module to decouple radioulnar torsion from wrist bending.

中文注释

基本传感原理是应变—电阻转换。手部运动时,关节转动引起传感贴片局部拉伸。这种形变改变嵌入液态金属线路的几何形状,从而调制其电阻。系统通过连续测量这些电阻变化来推断手指和腕部运动。本设计中,15 个通道用于手指运动测量,另 5 个通道构成分布式腕部—前臂阵列:位于腕背的 3 个通道(S1–S3)感知屈伸和桡偏/尺偏,位于前臂独立模块的 2 个通道(S4、S5)感知旋前/旋后。20 个通道中,18 个通道(15 个手指通道以及 S1–S3)集成在一体式传感贴片中,前臂通道对(S4、S5)构成独立薄型模块,以将桡尺骨扭转与腕部弯曲解耦。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L125

The basic sensing principle is strain-resistance transduction. During hand motion, joint rotation induces local stretching of the sensing patch. This deformation changes the geometry of the embedded liquid-metal traces and thereby modulates their electrical resistance. By continuously measuring these resistance variations, the system infers the underlying finger and wrist motions. In the present design, 15 channels are allocated to finger-motion measurement, and 5 channels form a distributed wrist–forearm array: 3 channels (S₁–S₃) placed on the dorsal wrist sense flexion/extension and radial/ulnar deviation, while 2 channels (S₄, S₅) are placed on the forearm as an independent module to sense pronation/supination. Of these 20 channels, 18 (all 15 finger channels together with S₁–S₃) are integrated into a single monolithic sensing patch, and the forearm pair (S₄, S₅) forms a separate thin module to decouple radioulnar torsion from wrist bending.

中文注释

基本传感原理是应变—电阻转换。手部运动时,关节转动引起传感贴片局部拉伸。这种形变改变嵌入液态金属线路的几何形状,从而调制其电阻。系统通过连续测量这些电阻变化来推断手指和腕部运动。本设计中,15 个通道用于手指运动测量,另 5 个通道构成分布式腕部—前臂阵列:位于腕背的 3 个通道(S1–S3)感知屈伸和桡偏/尺偏,位于前臂独立模块的 2 个通道(S4、S5)感知旋前/旋后。20 个通道中,18 个通道(15 个手指通道以及 S1–S3)集成在一体式传感贴片中,前臂通道对(S4、S5)构成独立薄型模块,以将桡尺骨扭转与腕部弯曲解耦。

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Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System

Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System / System Architecture, Sensing Principle, and Monolithic Integration

中文:集成传感系统的设计与制造 / 系统架构、传感原理与单片集成

文本相似度 69.5%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

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事实、方法或术语纠错;制造记录核对和可复现性补充
审稿意见
R2.4、R3.5
具体原因
审稿人2.4和3.5要求补充材料规格和制造可复现细节。核对制造记录后,材料应写为商业镓铟基油墨,而不能无依据地等同于共晶EGaIn;实际层序是两层50 μm先形成100 μm印刷基底,再由第三层50 μm封装。补充方法确实包含产品型号、工艺和终检步骤。
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Response-ZH.docx 意见2.4(0111–0114)和意见3.5(0189–0191);SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex:27–51;ALL.tex:130
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L136

As illustrated in Fig. 2, the sensing patch itself is implemented as a monolithic heterogeneous film based on screen-printed eutectic gallium-indium (EGaIn) and thermoplastic polyurethane (TPU) encapsulation. A 50 μm TPU core carries the liquid-metal traces, while two additional 50 μm TPU films are laminated onto the top and bottom surfaces to hermetically encapsulate the conductive channels and improve structural robustness. After the primary TPU lamination, the FPC-to-liquid-metal interface is further reinforced by cold-bonded polyimide (PI) films. This secondary encapsulation stabilizes the electrical and mechanical connection at the interface and helps prevent open-circuit failure during repeated motion, while avoiding additional thermal loading.

中文注释

如[图:可拉伸结构]所示,传感贴片采用由丝网印刷共晶镓铟(EGaIn)和热塑性聚氨酯(TPU)封装构成的一体式异质薄膜。一层 50 μm TPU 芯层承载液态金属线路,另外两层 50 μm TPU 薄膜分别层压在上下表面,以密封导电通道并提高结构稳健性。完成 TPU 主层压后,FPC 与液态金属的接口再采用冷粘聚酰亚胺(PI)薄膜增强。该二次封装可稳定接口处的电气和机械连接,帮助避免反复运动中的开路失效,同时避免额外热负荷。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L130

As illustrated in Fig. 2, the sensing patch is implemented as a monolithic heterogeneous film based on a commercial gallium–indium-based liquid-metal ink and modified thermoplastic polyurethane films; product identifiers and detailed fabrication and end-of-line inspection steps are provided in the Supplementary Methods. The active region comprises three supplier-specified 50 μm TPU films. In the 150 μm configuration reported here, the lower two films are laminated into a 100 μm base carrying the printed liquid-metal pattern, and the remaining 50 μm film seals the upper surface. The exploded schematic separates the three films only to clarify their structural composition. After the primary TPU lamination, the FPC-to-liquid-metal interface is further reinforced by cold-bonded polyimide (PI) films. This secondary encapsulation stabilizes the electrical and mechanical connection at the interface and helps prevent open-circuit failure during repeated motion, while avoiding additional thermal loading.

中文注释

如[图:可拉伸结构]所示,传感贴片采用一体式异质薄膜,由商业镓铟基液态金属油墨和改性热塑性聚氨酯薄膜制成;产品型号、详细制造步骤和终检方法见补充方法。活动区由三层供应商标称厚度为 50 μm 的 TPU 薄膜组成。在本文所用的 150 μm 结构中,下方两层先层压成承载印刷液态金属图形的 100 μm 基底,剩余一层 50 μm 薄膜用于密封上表面。爆炸图只是为了清楚展示三层的结构组成而将其分开绘制。完成 TPU 主层压后,FPC 与液态金属的接口再采用冷粘聚酰亚胺(PI)薄膜增强。该二次封装可稳定接口处的电气和机械连接,帮助避免反复运动中的开路失效,同时避免额外热负荷。

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审稿人 3.6 要求补充传感器理论模型。当前版保留投稿版中电阻率和几何量的单位定义,并新增“均匀通道、恒定电阻率、恒定液体体积”三个模型假设。这样既没有删掉原有信息,也明确了推导成立的条件。
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where ρ (Ω·m) is the resistivity of the liquid metal, and L, w, h (all in m) are the instantaneous channel length, width, and thickness, respectively, with S = wh denoting the cross-sectional area. A subscript “0” marks the undeformed reference state throughout this work; in particular, R₀ = ρ L₀ / S₀ is the initial baseline resistance.

中文注释

其中,ρ(Ω·m)为液态金属电阻率,L、w、h(单位均为 m)分别为通道瞬时长度、宽度和厚度,S=wh 表示横截面积。本文统一使用下标“0”表示未变形参考状态;特别地,R0=ρL0/S0 为初始基线电阻。

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ALL.tex L149

where ρ (Ω·m) is the liquid-metal resistivity, L, w, and h (all in m) are the instantaneous channel length, width, and thickness, respectively, and S=wh is the equivalent cross-sectional area. Subscript “0” denotes the undeformed reference state, such that R₀=ρ L₀/S₀. This idealized model assumes a uniform channel, constant resistivity, and constant liquid volume.

中文注释

其中,ρ(Ω·m)为液态金属电阻率,L、w、h(单位均为 m)分别为通道瞬时长度、宽度和厚度,S=wh 为等效横截面积。下标“0”表示未变形参考状态,因此 R₀=ρL₀/S₀。该理想化模型假设通道均匀、电阻率恒定且液态金属体积恒定。

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旧稿把线路宽度称为调节“灵敏度”的参数,但给出的推导直接支持的是固定应变下绝对电阻变化幅度 ΔR,而不是严格定义的归一化灵敏度或标定斜率。改为 absolute resistance swing 与方程能直接证明的量一致。
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The ΔR equation shows that the absolute resistance change scales with the baseline R₀ ∝ 1/(w₀ h₀) at fixed channel length. In the present process the channel thickness h₀ is set by the screen-printing stencil and the length L₀ is dictated by the anatomical sensor layout, leaving the trace width w₀ as the primary tunable parameter for sensitivity. Guided by this relation, the active sensing traces are narrowed to 400 μm to enlarge Δ R under functional strain, whereas the non-sensing interconnects are widened to 700 μm to suppress parasitic resistance variation caused by unintended stretching along routing paths.

中文注释

式[ΔR 方程]表明,在通道长度固定时,绝对电阻变化随基线 R0 变化,且 R0∝1/(w0h0)。在本工艺中,通道厚度 h0 由丝网印刷模板决定,长度 L0 由解剖传感布局决定,因此线路宽度 w0 是调节灵敏度的主要参数。依据该关系,活动传感线路缩窄至 400 μm,以增大功能应变下的 ΔR;非传感互连则加宽至 700 μm,以抑制走线路径意外拉伸引起的寄生电阻变化。

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ALL.tex L173

The ΔR equation shows that the absolute resistance change scales with the baseline R₀ ∝ 1/(w₀ h₀) at fixed channel length. In the present process the channel thickness h₀ is set by the screen-printing stencil and the length L₀ is dictated by the anatomical sensor layout, leaving the trace width w₀ as the primary tunable parameter for the absolute resistance swing. Guided by this relation, the active sensing traces are narrowed to 400 μm to enlarge Δ R under functional strain, whereas the non-sensing interconnects are widened to 700 μm to suppress parasitic resistance variation caused by unintended stretching along routing paths.

中文注释

式[ΔR 方程]表明,在通道长度固定时,绝对电阻变化随基线 R0 变化,且 R0∝1/(w0h0)。在本工艺中,通道厚度 h0 由丝网印刷模板决定,长度 L0 由解剖传感布局决定,因此线路宽度 w0 是调节绝对电阻变化幅度的主要参数。依据该关系,活动传感线路缩窄至 400 μm,以增大功能应变下的 ΔR;非传感互连则加宽至 700 μm,以抑制走线路径意外拉伸引起的寄生电阻变化。

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制造资料只核实为镓铟基商业液态金属油墨,不能百分之百断言为特定共晶EGaIn;因此把 EGaIn–TPU 改为 liquid-metal–TPU 与已核实材料信息一致,避免材料成分过度具体化。
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It should be noted that the resistance–strain and ΔR equations capture only the first-order geometric effect. Secondary mechanisms, including liquid-metal oxide-skin rearrangement, necking, and interfacial slip at the EGaIn–TPU boundary, introduce non-negligible deviations at large strains [21]. For circuit sizing we therefore use the in-service resistance range in Section III-A rather than the idealized R₀(1+ε)² bound, and rely on the empirical characterization in Section III to cover the full strain range.

中文注释

需要说明的是,式[电阻—应变方程]至式[ΔR 方程]只描述一阶几何效应。液态金属氧化皮重排、颈缩以及 EGaIn—TPU 界面滑移等次级机制会在大应变下引入不可忽略的偏差[引文]。因此,电路量程设计采用第三节 A 小节给出的实际使用电阻范围,而不是理想化的 R0(1+ε)² 上限;完整应变范围由第三节的经验表征覆盖。

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ALL.tex L175

It should be noted that the resistance–strain and ΔR equations capture only the first-order geometric effect. Secondary mechanisms, including liquid-metal oxide-skin rearrangement, necking, and interfacial slip at the liquid-metal–TPU boundary, introduce non-negligible deviations at large strains [21]. For circuit sizing we therefore use the in-service resistance range in Section III-A rather than the idealized R₀(1+ε)² bound, and rely on the empirical characterization in Section III to cover the full strain range.

中文注释

需要说明的是,式[电阻—应变方程]至式[ΔR 方程]只描述一阶几何效应。液态金属氧化皮重排、颈缩以及液态金属—TPU 界面滑移等次级机制会在大应变下引入不可忽略的偏差[引文]。因此,电路量程设计采用第三节 A 小节给出的实际使用电阻范围,而不是理想化的 R0(1+ε)² 上限;完整应变范围由第三节的经验表征覆盖。

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同上,已核实的材料名称是商业镓铟基液态金属油墨,而非有独立成分证据的特定EGaIn配比。将 EGaIn ink 改为 liquid-metal ink 是必要的材料事实校正,其余原句保留。
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ALL.tex L183

To realize the differentiated trace geometries within a monolithic film, a scalable fabrication protocol combining screen printing and multi-step thermal lamination is developed (文内交叉引用(fig:fabrication)(a)–(d)). EGaIn ink is first screen-printed onto a TPU substrate, after which the sensing stack is consolidated by multi-step thermal lamination. Non-stretchable PET films are embedded within the stack to define precise strain-limiting regions, mechanically decoupling the sensing elements from the anchoring zones.

中文注释

为在一体式薄膜中实现差异化线路几何,本文开发了结合丝网印刷和多步热层压的可扩展制造流程([图:制造](a)–(d))。首先将 EGaIn 油墨丝网印刷到 TPU 基底上,再通过多步热层压固结传感叠层。不可拉伸 PET 薄膜嵌入叠层中,用于界定精确的限应变区域,并从机械上将传感元件与锚定区域解耦。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L177

To realize the differentiated trace geometries within a monolithic film, a scalable fabrication protocol combining screen printing and multi-step thermal lamination is developed (文内交叉引用(fig:fabrication)(a)–(d)). The liquid-metal ink is first screen-printed onto a TPU substrate, after which the sensing stack is consolidated by multi-step thermal lamination. Non-stretchable PET films are embedded within the stack to define precise strain-limiting regions, mechanically decoupling the sensing elements from the anchoring zones.

中文注释

为在一体式薄膜中实现差异化线路几何,本文开发了结合丝网印刷和多步热层压的可扩展制造流程([图:制造](a)–(d))。首先将液态金属油墨丝网印刷到 TPU 基底上,再通过多步热层压固结传感叠层。不可拉伸 PET 薄膜嵌入叠层中,用于界定精确的限应变区域,并从机械上将传感元件与锚定区域解耦。

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审稿人2.8要求解释0.15–1.5 mm范围的实际含义。当前版本仅新增Z1–Z3位置和局部厚度的图文指引,并把PI-film简化为PI;新增部分与Figure 3和补充方法中的三个局部结构一致。
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Robust rigid–soft interfacing is achieved through an annular FPC design (文内交叉引用(fig:fabrication)(e)): the hollow-ring geometry creates a vertical mechanical interlock during thermal lamination, enhancing pull-out strength. A secondary PI-film encapsulation (文内交叉引用(fig:fabrication)(f)) further immobilizes the transition boundary to mitigate stress concentration and prevent dynamic contact failures. Finally, the device undergoes cyclic uniaxial preconditioning to stabilize electromechanical connectivity. Unlike ultra-thin electronic tattoos that prioritize conformability [18], the thickened TPU substrate combined with a hook-and-loop fastening mechanism supports long-term mechanical durability under demanding wearable conditions.

中文注释

环形 FPC 设计实现了可靠的刚柔接口([图:制造](e)):中空环形结构在热层压时形成垂直机械互锁,从而提高抗拔强度。二次 PI 薄膜封装([图:制造](f))进一步固定过渡边界,以缓解应力集中并避免动态接触失效。最后,器件通过循环单轴预处理稳定机电连接。不同于优先追求贴合性的超薄电子纹身[引文],加厚 TPU 基底结合魔术贴固定机制,可支持高负荷穿戴条件下的长期机械耐久性。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L179

Robust rigid–soft interfacing is achieved through an annular FPC design (文内交叉引用(fig:fabrication)(e)): the hollow-ring geometry creates a vertical mechanical interlock during thermal lamination, enhancing pull-out strength. A secondary PI encapsulation (文内交叉引用(fig:fabrication)(f)) further immobilizes the transition boundary to mitigate stress concentration and prevent dynamic contact failures. The corresponding Z1–Z3 locations and local thickness values are shown in 文内交叉引用(fig:fabrication)(e)–(f). Finally, the device undergoes cyclic uniaxial preconditioning to stabilize electromechanical connectivity. Unlike ultrathin electronic tattoos that prioritize conformability [18], the thickened TPU substrate combined with a hook-and-loop fastening mechanism supports long-term mechanical durability under demanding wearable conditions.

中文注释

环形 FPC 设计实现了可靠的刚柔接口([图:制造](e)):中空环形结构在热层压时形成垂直机械互锁,从而提高抗拔强度。二次 PI 封装([图:制造](f))进一步固定过渡边界,以缓解应力集中并避免动态接触失效。对应的 Z1–Z3 位置和局部厚度见[图:制造](e)–(f)。最后,器件通过循环单轴预处理稳定机电连接。不同于优先追求贴合性的超薄电子纹身[引文],加厚 TPU 基底结合魔术贴固定机制,可支持高负荷穿戴条件下的长期机械耐久性。

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这段压缩没有增加新的实验事实,审稿人3.4要求的是补充PET物理验证,而不是把原本清楚的结构说明改写得更短。当前压缩还删除了“固定于指骨中心”和“液态金属蛇形桥”等具体信息。按最小修改原则,应恢复初稿本段,再在其后保留新增实验数据。
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ALL.tex L200

To reduce signal coupling caused by non-target deformation, we introduce a heterogeneous strain-limiting structure, as shown in Fig. 2. PET and hook-side layers are laminated onto selected non-sensing regions of the patch to form locally stiff anchoring islands, which are fixed to the glove at the phalangeal centers. The liquid-metal sensing traces are arranged as soft serpentine bridges between adjacent anchoring islands.

中文注释

为减少非目标形变引起的信号耦合,本文引入如[图:可拉伸结构]所示的异质限应变结构。PET 和魔术贴钩面层被层压到贴片选定的非传感区域,形成局部刚性锚定岛,并固定在手指各指骨中央。液态金属传感线路则作为柔软蛇形桥连接相邻锚定岛。

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ALL.tex L194

To reduce non-target deformation, PET and hook-side layers form stiff anchoring islands in non-sensing regions, while soft serpentine traces bridge adjacent islands (Fig. 2). Joint motion therefore stretches the sensing bridge while limiting deformation in the anchored region, concentrating strain near the target joint.

中文注释

为减少非目标形变,PET 与魔术贴钩面层在非传感区域形成刚性锚定岛,柔软蛇形线路连接相邻锚定岛([图:可拉伸结构])。关节运动时,传感桥被拉伸,而锚定区域的形变受到限制,从而使应变集中在目标关节附近。

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具体原因
审稿人3.4明确指出PET限应变岛缺少独立验证。作者新增了视频局部应变和CH02电学对照,并如实报告每种条件n=1、技术重复和分辨率边界。这些数字在补充图S2、表S6和视频S1中有完整依据,因此必须保留。
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该版本无对应英文内容

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该版本无对应内容。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L196

Under approximately 30% strain, the unreinforced specimen reached 20.8% ± 0.0% local strain, whereas the PET-reinforced region showed 0.9% ± 1.7%, below the approximately 3.4% one-pixel resolution. The CH02 response was 9.3% lower in the PET-reinforced specimen (38.8% versus 42.8%). Each condition used one independent specimen, and repeated cycles were technical repeats. Supplementary Fig. S2, Table S6, and Video S1 provide the full optical analysis. These data support local strain limitation but not paired material causality or fatigue lifetime.

中文注释

在约 30% 应变下,无增强试样的局部应变达到 20.8%±0.0%,而 PET 增强区域为 0.9%±1.7%,低于约 3.4% 的单像素分辨率。PET 增强试样中 CH02 响应比无增强试样低 9.3%(38.8% 对 42.8%)。每种条件各使用一个独立试样,重复循环属于技术重复。完整光学分析见补充图 S2、表 S6 和视频 S1。这些数据支持局部限应变作用,但不能证明配对的材料因果效应或疲劳寿命。

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保留当前处理:原段关键内容已合并到后续综合段落
原因类别
缺乏实质依据;删除重复和过强机理结论
审稿意见
R3.4
具体原因
该段在初稿中清楚解释了“锚定岛位移—传感桥拉伸—应变集中—减少串扰”的机制。删除它没有新增实验或审稿要求支撑;卡20的压缩版也丢失了部分具体说明。按用户要求应恢复原段,并把卡21的新验证接在其后。
核查依据
没有直接审稿依据;意见3.4要求补证据而非删除机制解释
审计置信度
100%
投稿版内容已删除

2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L202

When a finger joint moves, the relative displacement between two neighboring anchoring islands increases. As a result, the soft sensing bridge spanning that joint is stretched, while the anchored regions deform much less. In this way, strain is concentrated mainly in the sensing region over the target joint instead of spreading across the whole substrate. This design helps each channel respond more selectively to its target joint motion and reduces inter-channel mechanical crosstalk and motion artifacts.

中文注释

手指关节运动时,相邻两个锚定岛之间的相对位移增大。因此,跨越该关节的柔软传感桥被拉伸,而锚定区域的形变要小得多。这样,应变主要集中在目标关节上方的传感区域,而不是扩散到整个基底。该设计有助于各通道更有选择性地响应目标关节运动,并减少通道间机械串扰和运动伪差。

当前工作区版本

该版本无对应英文内容

中文注释

该版本无对应内容。

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Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System

Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System / Pre-Stretching Mechanism and Kinematic Layout

中文:集成传感系统的设计与制造 / 预拉伸机制与运动学布局

文本相似度 91.9%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

修改原因与证据
修改结论
保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
事实、方法或术语纠错;DIP限制与佩戴归一化说明
审稿意见
R3.2、R3.6
具体原因
审稿人3.6要求说明标定模型,审稿人3.2要求澄清DIP缺失的限制。wearing-dependent neutral state 比 user-specific zero-pose 更准确,因为每次重新穿戴或硬件重连都会重新记录中性参考,但不进行参与者专属模型重训练;DIP/PIP/MCP全称也提高了自洽性。
核查依据
Response-ZH.docx 意见3.2(0166–0171)和意见3.6(0195–0201);ALL.tex:201–203, 291, 299
审计置信度
98%
局部改写

2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L207–L209

The patch adopts an anthropometric undersizing scheme to establish a user-specific zero-pose and to maintain a monotonic sensor response across the hand workspace. When worn, the dimensional mismatch between the glove and diverse hand sizes pre-stretches the sensor, which helps prevent buckling and reduces hysteresis when the fingers are in relaxed states (e.g., finger extension). Since DIP and PIP motion is strongly coupled in free movement, DIP-specific sensing was omitted to reduce channel count. Each finger retains dedicated channels for MCP flexion-extension and, where applicable, MCP abduction-adduction. This design prioritizes MCP- and PIP-dominant motions. A subset of the target gestures, such as certain ASL letters, involves DIP flexion that is only indirectly reflected through the coupled PIP response, and fully decoupled DIP sensing is left to future work.

中文注释

贴片采用人体测量欠尺寸设计,以建立用户特定零姿态,并在手部工作空间内保持单调传感响应。穿戴时,手套与不同手型之间的尺寸差会对传感器施加预拉伸,从而有助于避免屈曲,并减少手指处于放松状态(例如伸直)时的迟滞。由于 DIP 与 PIP 在自由运动中高度耦合,为减少通道数量而省略 DIP 专用传感。每根手指保留 MCP 屈伸专用通道,并在适用处设置 MCP 外展/内收通道。该设计优先覆盖以 MCP 和 PIP 为主的运动。部分目标手势(如某些 ASL 字母)涉及 DIP 屈曲,只能通过耦合的 PIP 响应间接反映;完全解耦的 DIP 感知留待未来研究。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L201–L203

The patch adopts an anthropometric undersizing scheme to establish a wearing-dependent, pre-stretched neutral state and to maintain a monotonic sensor response across the hand workspace. When worn, the dimensional mismatch between the glove and diverse hand sizes pre-stretches the sensor, which helps prevent buckling and reduces hysteresis when the fingers are in relaxed states (e.g., finger extension). Since distal and proximal interphalangeal (DIP and PIP) motion is strongly coupled in free movement, DIP-specific sensing was omitted to reduce channel count. Each finger retains dedicated channels for metacarpophalangeal (MCP) flexion–extension and, where applicable, MCP abduction–adduction. This design prioritizes motions dominated by the MCP and PIP joints. A subset of the target gestures, such as certain ASL letters, involves DIP flexion that is only indirectly reflected through the coupled PIP response, and fully decoupled DIP sensing is left to future work.

中文注释

贴片采用人体测量欠尺寸设计,以建立与每次穿戴状态相关的预拉伸中性状态,并在手部工作空间内保持单调传感响应。穿戴时,手套与不同手型之间的尺寸差会对传感器施加预拉伸,从而有助于避免屈曲,并减少手指处于放松状态(例如伸直)时的迟滞。由于远端指间关节(DIP)与近端指间关节(PIP)在自由运动中高度耦合,为减少通道数量而省略 DIP 专用传感。每根手指保留掌指关节(MCP)屈伸专用通道,并在适用处设置 MCP 外展/内收通道。该设计优先覆盖以 MCP 和 PIP 为主的运动。部分目标手势(如某些 ASL 字母)涉及 DIP 屈曲,只能通过耦合的 PIP 响应间接反映;完全解耦的 DIP 感知留待未来研究。

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Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System

Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System / Distributed Antagonistic Array for Wrist Motion Decoding

中文:集成传感系统的设计与制造 / 用于腕部运动解码的分布式拮抗阵列

文本相似度 99.6%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

修改原因与证据
修改结论
保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
缺乏实质依据;解剖学术语纠错
审稿意见
R2.10、R3.6
具体原因
实质变化只有把 radius-ulna rotation 换成 radioulnar rotation,物理含义没有改变,也没有审稿意见指出原词错误。虽然新词更紧凑,但不足以构成必须修改正文的理由;按最小修改原则建议恢复原文。
核查依据
没有针对该术语的审稿意见或新增实验
审计置信度
98%
局部改写

2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L230

To reduce cross-axis coupling in wrist motion sensing, a five-channel distributed antagonistic sensing array is designed using a spatially separated layout, consisting of a dorsal wrist module and an independent forearm module. As illustrated in Fig. 2, the dorsal wrist module measures flexion/extension using a central longitudinal channel (S1) and radial/ulnar deviation using a lateral differential pair (S2 and S3). To measure pronation/supination without interference from wrist bending, the forearm module captures the shear strain induced by radius-ulna rotation. The resulting multi-channel signals are then processed by the machine-learning pipeline.

中文注释

为减少腕部运动感知中的跨轴耦合,本文设计了由腕背模块和独立前臂模块组成的空间分离式五通道分布式拮抗传感阵列。如[图:可拉伸结构]所示,腕背模块使用中央纵向通道 S1 测量屈伸,并使用侧向差分通道对 S2、S3 测量桡偏/尺偏。为了在不受腕部弯曲干扰的情况下测量旋前/旋后,前臂模块采集由桡骨—尺骨旋转引起的剪切应变。所得多通道信号随后由机器学习流程处理。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L224

To reduce cross-axis coupling in wrist motion sensing, a five-channel distributed antagonistic sensing array is designed using a spatially separated layout, consisting of a dorsal wrist module and an independent forearm module. As illustrated in Fig. 2, the dorsal wrist module measures flexion/extension using a central longitudinal channel (S1) and radial/ulnar deviation using a lateral differential pair (S2 and S3). To measure pronation/supination without interference from wrist bending, the forearm module captures the shear strain induced by radioulnar rotation. The resulting multi-channel signals are then processed by the machine-learning pipeline.

中文注释

为减少腕部运动感知中的跨轴耦合,本文设计了由腕背模块和独立前臂模块组成的空间分离式五通道分布式拮抗传感阵列。如[图:可拉伸结构]所示,腕背模块使用中央纵向通道 S1 测量屈伸,并使用侧向差分通道对 S2、S3 测量桡偏/尺偏。为了在不受腕部弯曲干扰的情况下测量旋前/旋后,前臂模块采集由桡尺骨旋转引起的剪切应变。所得多通道信号随后由机器学习流程处理。

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Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System

Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System / Compact DAQ and Mechano-Electrical Integration

中文:集成传感系统的设计与制造 / 紧凑型 DAQ 与机械—电气集成

文本相似度 97.7%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

修改原因与证据
修改结论
保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
事实、方法或术语纠错;图件更新后的交叉引用修正
审稿意见
R2.6、R2.10
具体原因
Figure硬件图的LaTeX标签已由 fig:WatchPCB_image 改为 fig:daq_unit_hardware;若恢复旧引用会造成交叉引用失配。rigid–soft 也与全文统一术语一致。这是必要的引用和术语一致性修正。
核查依据
ALL.tex:134–140 定义 fig:daq_unit_hardware;当前引用位于ALL.tex约L282;Response-ZH.docx意见2.6及2.10
审计置信度
100%
局部改写

2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L292

The wrist-mounted DAQ unit is built on a compact 4-layer HDI PCB centered around an ESP32-PICO-D4 SiP, as shown in 文内交叉引用(fig:WatchPCBᵢmage)(a)–(c). The PCB is packaged in a lightweight 3D-printed nylon enclosure to reduce interference with natural hand motion. The sensing patch is connected to the DAQ unit through a contoured FPC routed along the dorsal wrist, which provides compliance during wrist rotation and improves hard–soft interconnection reliability. Power is supplied by a 3.7 V Li-ion battery through an onboard power management circuit.

中文注释

腕戴式 DAQ 单元采用以 ESP32-PICO-D4 系统级封装芯片为核心的紧凑型四层 HDI PCB,如[图:WatchPCB](a)–(c)所示。PCB 封装在轻质 3D 打印尼龙外壳中,以减少对自然手部运动的干扰。传感贴片通过沿腕背布置的随形 FPC 连接至 DAQ 单元,该 FPC 在腕部旋转时提供柔顺性,并提高软硬互连可靠性。系统由 3.7 V 锂离子电池通过板载电源管理电路供电。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L286

The wrist-mounted DAQ unit is built on a compact 4-layer HDI PCB centered around an ESP32-PICO-D4 SiP, as shown in 文内交叉引用(fig:daq_unit_hardware)(a)–(c). The PCB is packaged in a lightweight 3D-printed nylon enclosure to reduce interference with natural hand motion. The sensing patch is connected to the DAQ unit through a contoured FPC routed along the dorsal wrist, which provides compliance during wrist rotation and improves rigid–soft interconnection reliability. Power is supplied by a 3.7 V Li-ion battery through an onboard power management circuit.

中文注释

腕戴式 DAQ 单元采用以 ESP32-PICO-D4 系统级封装芯片为核心的紧凑型四层 HDI PCB,如[图:DAQ 硬件](a)–(c)所示。PCB 封装在轻质 3D 打印尼龙外壳中,以减少对自然手部运动的干扰。传感贴片通过沿腕背布置的随形 FPC 连接至 DAQ 单元,该 FPC 在腕部旋转时提供柔顺性,并提高刚柔互连可靠性。系统由 3.7 V 锂离子电池通过板载电源管理电路供电。

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Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System

Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System / Analog Front-End and Data Acquisition

中文:集成传感系统的设计与制造 / 模拟前端与数据采集

文本相似度 98.3%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

修改原因与证据
修改结论
保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
事实、方法或术语纠错;图件更新后的交叉引用修正
审稿意见
R2.6、R2.10
具体原因
本卡只更新Figure硬件图的交叉引用标签。当前图环境实际定义为 fig:daq_unit_hardware,恢复 fig:WatchPCB_image 会引入未定义引用,因此必须保留当前版本。
核查依据
ALL.tex:134–140和289;Response-ZH.docx意见2.10要求交叉引用检查
审计置信度
100%
局部改写

2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L295

As shown in 文内交叉引用(fig:WatchPCBᵢmage)(d), each channel is acquired through a three-stage readout chain consisting of resistive voltage division, differential amplification, and 16-bit analog-to-digital conversion. The liquid-metal sensor signal is first converted into a voltage by a matched divider, then amplified by an instrumentation amplifier (gain: 20 V/V), and finally digitized by an ADS1118 ADC via SPI. Channel-wise reference resistors are selected according to the nominal resistance range of each sensing unit to improve voltage swing and effective resolution.

中文注释

如[图:WatchPCB](d)所示,每个通道通过三级读出链路采集,包括电阻分压、差分放大和 16 位模数转换。液态金属传感器信号先由匹配分压器转换为电压,再由仪表放大器放大(增益 20 V/V),最后由 ADS1118 ADC 通过 SPI 数字化。各通道参考电阻根据对应传感单元的标称电阻范围选择,以提高电压摆幅和有效分辨率。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L289

As shown in 文内交叉引用(fig:daq_unit_hardware)(d), each channel is acquired through a three-stage readout chain consisting of resistive voltage division, differential amplification, and 16-bit analog-to-digital conversion. The liquid-metal sensor signal is first converted into a voltage by a matched divider, then amplified by an instrumentation amplifier (gain: 20 V/V), and finally digitized by an ADS1118 ADC via SPI. Channel-wise reference resistors are selected according to the nominal resistance range of each sensing unit to improve voltage swing and effective resolution.

中文注释

如[图:DAQ 硬件](d)所示,每个通道通过三级读出链路采集,包括电阻分压、差分放大和 16 位模数转换。液态金属传感器信号先由匹配分压器转换为电压,再由仪表放大器放大(增益 20 V/V),最后由 ADS1118 ADC 通过 SPI 数字化。各通道参考电阻根据对应传感单元的标称电阻范围选择,以提高电压摆幅和有效分辨率。

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Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System

Design And Fabrication of The Integrated Sensing System / Analog Front-End and Data Acquisition

中文:集成传感系统的设计与制造 / 模拟前端与数据采集

无一对一对应段落。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

修改原因与证据
修改结论
保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
审稿人明确要求;新增信号链和标定模型
审稿意见
TE.3、R2.5、R3.6
具体原因
审稿人3.6直接要求补充理论框架、信号处理模型和标定模型。新增链路明确从运动到应变、电阻、电压、数字序列、模型输入和离散标签的关系,并给出每次穿戴的中性归一化公式,同时明确这不是连续逆运动学重建,证据和修改位置完全对应。
核查依据
Response-ZH.docx 意见3.6(0195–0201);ALL.tex:291;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex:69–83
审计置信度
100%
当前版新增

2026-04-25 投稿版

该版本无对应英文内容

中文注释

该版本无对应内容。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L291

The sensing pathway is q(t)→ε(t)→ R(t)→ V(t)→ d(t)→ x(t)→ĝ. For each wearing session, channel i is normalized as xᵢ(t)=[Rᵢ(t)-Rᵢ,₀]/|Rᵢ,₀| using a neutral reference renewed after re-donning or hardware reconnection. This procedure requires no participant-specific model retraining and supports discrete classification rather than inverse-kinematic reconstruction.

中文注释

传感链路表示为 q(t)→ε(t)→R(t)→V(t)→d(t)→x(t)→ĝ。每次穿戴时,通道 i 使用中性参考值按 xᵢ(t)=[Rᵢ(t)−Rᵢ,₀]/|Rᵢ,₀| 进行归一化;重新穿戴或硬件重新连接后更新该参考值。此过程不需要针对参与者重新训练模型,支持的是离散分类,而不是逆运动学重建。

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Electromechanical Characterization and Validation

Electromechanical Characterization and Validation

中文:机电表征与验证

文本相似度 87.0%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

修改原因与证据
修改结论
保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
必要的清晰度修正;用户明确要求与能力边界对齐
审稿意见
TE.3、R2.5
具体原因
仅删除了没有明确定义且容易显得空泛的“sensor-level / motion-level”分层说法,后两句实验内容没有改变。该修改不是新增实验,也不是审稿人逐字要求,而是术语清理,能使段落直接说明本节实际做了什么。
核查依据
ALL.tex L295;初始提交 9005f98 的对应段落;本轮用户明确要求清除 system-level 类分层表述。
审计置信度
99%
局部改写

2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L299

This section validates the HW-AVATAR system from sensor-level behavior to motion-level decoding performance. We first characterize the basic electromechanical properties of the liquid-metal sensing units using benchtop tensile tests, including quasi-static loading–unloading, step response, frequency response, and cyclic durability. We then evaluate the temporal response of the system in a fast finger-snapping task and examine its decoupling capability in representative multi-DoF finger and wrist motions.

中文注释

本节从传感器层面的行为到动作层面的解码性能,对 HW-AVATAR 系统进行验证。首先,通过台架拉伸试验表征液态金属传感单元的基本机电性能,包括准静态加载—卸载、阶跃响应、频率响应和循环耐久性。随后,通过快速打响指任务评估系统的时间响应,并考察其在代表性多自由度手指和腕部运动中的解耦能力。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L295

This section examines the liquid-metal sensing units and their responses during representative finger and wrist motions. We first characterize the basic electromechanical properties of the liquid-metal sensing units using benchtop tensile tests, including quasi-static loading–unloading, step response, frequency response, and cyclic durability. We then evaluate the temporal response of the system in a fast finger-snapping task and examine its decoupling capability in representative multi-DoF finger and wrist motions.

中文注释

本节考察液态金属传感单元及其在代表性手指和腕部运动中的响应。首先,通过台架拉伸试验表征液态金属传感单元的基本机电性能,包括准静态加载—卸载、阶跃响应、频率响应和循环耐久性。随后,通过快速打响指任务评估系统的时间响应,并考察其在代表性多自由度手指和腕部运动中的解耦能力。

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Electromechanical Characterization and Validation

Electromechanical Characterization and Validation / Experimental Conditions

中文:机电表征与验证 / 实验条件

文本相似度 88.8%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

修改原因与证据
修改结论
保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
事实、方法或术语纠错;采集链路事实修正与新测量
审稿意见
TE.3、R2.3、R3.1、R3.5
具体原因
旧稿把 117 Hz 和 TCP/IP 写成统一采集条件,但复核设备时间戳后,20 通道完整帧周期中位数为 8.335 ms,即 119.98 Hz;实际链路为 ESP-NOW 加 USB 网关。因此这一处必须按实测链路和实测帧率更正。网页旧稿中的“Ω”是转换器保留了数学模式定界符,当前 ALL.tex 已用 siunitx 正确排版,不是正文 PDF 的美元符号错误。
核查依据
审稿意见 2.3、TE.3、3.1;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L69 和 Supplementary Table S7 L292;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L209–219。
审计置信度
100%
局部改写

2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L301

Unless otherwise stated, all characterization and motion-validation experiments used the same wireless DAQ pipeline with a sampling rate of 117 Hz and TCP/IP data transmission. In the fabricated sensors, the liquid-metal channels showed a nominal resistance of approximately 60 Ω in the unloaded state. Under typical in-service wearing conditions, the local strain at each sensing bridge remains below the 100% benchtop reference used in Fig. 5(a), and the observed resistance reached approximately 150 Ω during representative finger flexion. This in-service range, rather than the ideal R₀(1+ε)^2 upper bound, was used to set the voltage-divider and ADC input ranges. The benchtop characterization in Fig. 5(a) approaches the (1+ε)^2 behavior more closely when the full 0% to 100% strain is applied on the tensile stage.

中文注释

除非另有说明,所有表征和动作验证实验均采用同一无线数据采集流程,采样率为 117 Hz,并通过 TCP/IP 传输数据。制成的传感器中,液态金属通道在未加载状态下的标称电阻约为 60 Ω。在典型佩戴使用条件下,各传感桥的局部应变低于图 5(a) 所采用的 100% 台架参考应变,代表性手指屈曲时观测电阻约为 150 Ω。电压分压器和 ADC 输入范围依据这一实际使用范围设定,而不是依据理想的 R₀(1+ε)² 上限。图 5(a) 的台架表征在拉伸平台施加完整的 0% 至 100% 应变时,更接近 (1+ε)² 关系。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L297

Unless otherwise stated, all characterization and motion-validation experiments used the acquisition path from the wrist-mounted DAQ unit to the host via ESP-NOW and a USB-connected gateway, with a complete-frame rate of approximately 120 Hz across all 20 channels. In the fabricated sensors, the liquid-metal channels showed a nominal unloaded resistance of approximately 60 Ω. Under typical in-service wearing conditions, the local strain at each sensing bridge remains below the 100% benchtop reference used in Fig. 5(a), and the observed resistance reached approximately 150 Ω during representative finger flexion. This in-service range, rather than the ideal R₀(1+ε)^2 upper bound, was used to set the voltage-divider and ADC input ranges. The benchtop characterization in Fig. 5(a) approaches the (1+ε)^2 behavior more closely when the full 0% to 100% strain is applied on the tensile stage.

中文注释

除非另有说明,所有表征和动作验证实验均采用从腕戴式 DAQ 单元经 ESP-NOW 和 USB 网关到主机的采集链路,20 个通道的完整帧率约为 120 Hz。制成的传感器中,液态金属通道的未加载标称电阻约为 60 Ω。在典型佩戴使用条件下,各传感桥的局部应变低于图 5(a) 所采用的 100% 台架参考应变,代表性手指屈曲时观测电阻约为 150 Ω。电压分压器和 ADC 输入范围依据这一实际使用范围设定,而不是依据理想的 R₀(1+ε)² 上限。图 5(a) 的台架表征在拉伸平台施加完整的 0% 至 100% 应变时,更接近 (1+ε)² 关系。

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Electromechanical Characterization and Validation / Experimental Conditions

中文:机电表征与验证 / 实验条件

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具体原因
审稿人明确要求给出多个传感单元之间的差异和硬件工程指标,因此新增了 5 个独立物理贴片的静态一致性试验。数值、独立单位和记录条件在补充方法及 Supplementary Table S7 中均有对应记录。网页把末尾单位转换丢失成“0.000633 .”,正确显示应为“0.000633 %·s⁻¹”;这是 HTML 生成 bug,不应据此删除正文。
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审稿意见 2.4、3.5;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L73–75 和 Supplementary Table S7 L294;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L223–231、L379–385。
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2026-04-25 投稿版

该版本无对应英文内容

中文注释

该版本无对应内容。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L299

To quantify baseline variation among corresponding sensing units, five independently fabricated sensing patches were sequentially connected to the same DAQ unit and recorded for approximately 20 s in a flat, unloaded state. Each physical patch was treated as an independent unit (n=5). Across corresponding units, the between-patch coefficient of variation of unloaded resistance ranged from 9.3% to 30.0% (median 16.6%); median relative static noise was 0.0195% (95th percentile 0.0569%), and median absolute relative drift was 0.000633 %·s⁻¹. These measurements characterize the complete sensing-and-readout chain and motivate wearing-specific neutral normalization.

中文注释

为量化对应传感单元之间的基线差异,将 5 个独立制造的传感贴片依次连接至同一 DAQ 单元,并在平放、未加载状态下各记录约 20 s。每个物理贴片均作为一个独立单位(n=5)。在对应单元之间,未加载电阻的跨贴片变异系数为 9.3%–30.0%(中位数 16.6%);相对静态噪声中位数为 0.0195%(第 95 百分位数为 0.0569%),绝对相对漂移中位数为 0.000633 %·s⁻¹。这些测量表征的是完整的传感与读出链路,并说明每次佩戴进行中性基线归一化的必要性。

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Electromechanical Characterization and Validation / Electromechanical Characteristics of Sensor Units

中文:机电表征与验证 / 传感单元的机电特性

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R2.4、R3.5
具体原因
制造记录和保留试验资料表明设备是万能材料试验机,而不是旧稿所称的可编程电动直线平台。审稿人还要求说明测试样本数量和安装方法,因此补充 n=1、循环属于技术重复以及夹具信息。恢复旧稿会重新引入设备名称错误并隐藏独立试样边界。
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审稿意见 2.4、3.5;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L223–231;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L61;中英文回复 DOCX 的 Comment 2.4。
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ALL.tex L304

Electromechanical characterization was performed on a programmable motorized linear stage through four tests: quasi-static loading–unloading, step-strain response, response consistency at different excitation frequencies, and long-term cyclic loading (文内交叉引用(fig:sensor_char)).

中文注释

机电表征在可编程电动直线平台上通过四项试验完成:准静态加载—卸载、阶跃应变响应、不同激励频率下的响应一致性以及长期循环加载(见图 5)。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L302

Electromechanical characterization used a universal testing machine for quasi-static loading–unloading, repeated loading, frequency response, and long-term cyclic loading (文内交叉引用(fig:sensor_char)). All panels use one channel from the same complete sensing patch (independent specimen n=1); loading cycles are within-specimen repeats. The patch was mounted using protected 3D-printed hook-and-loop adapters.

中文注释

机电表征使用万能材料试验机完成,包括准静态加载—卸载、重复加载、频率响应和长期循环加载(见图 5)。所有子图均使用同一个完整传感贴片上的一个通道,独立试样数为 n=1;加载循环属于试样内重复。贴片通过带保护结构的 3D 打印魔术贴适配夹具安装。

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Electromechanical Characterization and Validation / Electromechanical Characteristics of Sensor Units

中文:机电表征与验证 / 传感单元的机电特性

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原文“exceeding 9,000 cycles”与保留记录不符,正确条件是 0%–40% 应变下正好 9,000 次;而且只有一个完整贴片上的一个通道,不能写成整个传感器批次的普遍耐久性。删除“波形形状保持稳定”也避免保留缺乏单独量化依据的附加结论。
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审稿意见 2.4、3.5;Figure 5(d) 图注 ALL.tex L187;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L225、L295;Supplementary Table S7 的试样边界说明。
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L306

The sensor shows a highly linear resistance–strain relationship (R²>0.99) with low hysteresis (1.96%). The response amplitude remains stable from 0.2 to 2.0 Hz, indicating consistent sensor behavior within the tested frequency range. During cyclic loading exceeding 9,000 cycles, only a small baseline drift was observed after initial conditioning, while no fracture or open-circuit failure occurred and the waveform shape remained stable.

中文注释

该传感器表现出高度线性的电阻—应变关系(R²>0.99)和较低的滞后(1.96%)。在 0.2–2.0 Hz 范围内,响应幅值保持稳定,表明传感器在测试频率范围内行为一致。在超过 9,000 次循环加载期间,初始调理后仅观察到很小的基线漂移,未发生断裂或开路故障,波形形状保持稳定。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L304

The tested channel shows a highly linear resistance–strain relationship (R²>0.99) with low hysteresis (1.96%). The response amplitude remains stable from 0.2 to 2.0 Hz within the tested range. During 9,000 cycles at 0%–40% strain, only a small baseline drift was observed after initial conditioning, while no fracture or open-circuit failure occurred. These results describe the tested patch and are not extrapolated to batch-level lifetime statistics.

中文注释

被测通道表现出高度线性的电阻—应变关系(R²>0.99)和较低的滞后(1.96%)。在测试的 0.2–2.0 Hz 范围内,响应幅值保持稳定。在 0%–40% 应变下进行 9,000 次循环时,初始调理后仅观察到很小的基线漂移,未发生断裂或开路故障。这些结果仅描述该被测贴片,不能外推为批次层面的寿命统计。

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Electromechanical Characterization and Validation / Recording of a Rapid Motion Transient

中文:机电表征与验证 / 快速运动瞬态记录

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TE.3、R3.1
具体原因
没有同步高速运动真值,打响指实验只能证明系统记录到了动作相关的电阻瞬态,不能测得传感器固有动态响应时间。新标题准确限定了证据范围,避免标题先行声称完成了完整的动态响应分析。
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审稿意见 3.1、TE.3;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L317–321;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L69–71。
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ALL.tex L308

Dynamic Response and Transient Analysis

中文注释

动态响应与瞬态分析

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L306

Recording of a Rapid Motion Transient

中文注释

快速动作瞬态的记录

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Electromechanical Characterization and Validation / Recording of a Rapid Motion Transient

中文:机电表征与验证 / 快速运动瞬态记录

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TE.3、R2.3、R3.1
具体原因
审稿人 3.1 要求解释快速动作、采样率和端到端延迟的关系。当前版本把旧的 117 Hz 更正为实测约 120 Hz,加入图中可直接核查的五次循环,并把“稳定跟踪快速动作”收窄为“记录主要电阻波形”。缺少同步真值时,这一限制必须保留。
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审稿意见 3.1、TE.3;Figure 6;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L317–321;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L69–71。
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ALL.tex L309

To examine the transient response of the sensing array during a rapid hand motion, a high-velocity index-finger snapping experiment was conducted (文内交叉引用(fig:index_snapᵢmage)). The release phase lasts less than 100 ms and produces a sharp, short-duration deformation, making it suitable for evaluating the system response under fast motion. The recorded signals show that the sensing array can clearly capture this rapid transient across multiple channels at the adopted sampling rate of 117 Hz. A brief negative excursion in the PIP channel appears immediately after release onset, indicating short post-snap inertial recoil, followed by rapid recovery to baseline. These results demonstrate that the system can stably track fast transient hand motions with good repeatability.

中文注释

为考察传感阵列在快速手部动作中的瞬态响应,开展了高速食指打响指实验(见图 6)。释放阶段持续时间小于 100 ms,会产生尖锐、短时的形变,因此适合评估系统在快速动作下的响应。记录信号表明,在采用的 117 Hz 采样率下,传感阵列能够在多个通道上清楚捕捉这一快速瞬态。释放开始后,PIP 通道立即出现短暂负向变化,表明打响指后存在短时惯性回弹,随后迅速恢复至基线。这些结果表明系统能够以良好重复性稳定跟踪快速瞬态手部动作。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L307

To test rapid-action recording, an index-finger snapping experiment was conducted (文内交叉引用(fig:index_snapᵢmage)). The release, which lasted less than 100 ms, produces a sharp deformation that is resolved across consecutive samples at the approximately 120-Hz complete-frame rate, with similar waveforms over five cycles. A brief negative PIP excursion is consistent with post-snap recoil. The experiment supports recording of the principal action-related resistance waveform, but without synchronized motion ground truth it does not measure intrinsic sensor response time or continuous trajectory accuracy.

中文注释

为测试快速动作记录能力,开展了食指打响指实验(见图 6)。持续时间小于 100 ms 的释放动作产生尖锐形变,在约 120 Hz 的完整帧率下可由连续多个采样点分辨,五次循环的波形相似。PIP 通道的短暂负向变化与打响指后的回弹现象相符。该实验支持系统能够记录主要的动作相关电阻波形;但由于缺少同步运动真值,它不能测量传感器固有响应时间,也不能证明连续轨迹的精度。

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Electromechanical Characterization and Validation / Distinct Representation of Wrist Motion Modes

中文:机电表征与验证 / 腕部运动模式的区分表征

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R3.4
具体原因
审稿人 3.4 明确要求分别验证腕部拮抗式五通道阵列。作者因此新增六名参与者的三轴腕部定量实验,给出了分析单位、重复定义、目标/离轴幅值比、CV 和拮抗相关系数,并明确无角度真值时的能力边界。旧稿只有定性图注引用,无法回答该审稿意见。
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审稿意见 3.4;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L77–79 和 Supplementary Table S7 L295–298;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L355–357;中英文回复 DOCX Comment 3.4。
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ALL.tex L341

Isolated motion tests further confirmed that the five-channel wrist array produces clearly distinguishable signatures for flexion/extension, radial/ulnar deviation, and pronation/supination, as shown in 文内交叉引用(fig:wrist_motion). The channel-level behavior is described in the figure caption.

中文注释

独立动作测试进一步证实,五通道腕部阵列针对屈曲/伸展、桡偏/尺偏以及旋前/旋后可产生清晰可区分的响应特征,如图 9 所示。各通道的具体表现见图注。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L327

Quantitative wrist analysis used six participants from the ten-participant cohort, covering S/M/L/XL glove sizes. Each participant performed self-paced flexion–extension, radial–ulnar deviation, and pronation–supination; the participant was the independent unit (n=6), with three prespecified central peak-to-peak cycles per axis treated as within-participant repeats. At the group level, the prespecified target channels were dominant: S₁ during flexion–extension, S₂/S₃ during radial–ulnar deviation, and S₄/S₅ during pronation–supination. The ratios of target-channel to off-axis response amplitudes were 9.68 ± 1.36, 4.01 ± 0.20, and 7.44 ± 0.48, respectively; their participant-level definition is provided in the Supplementary Methods. The amplitude CV of the target channels averaged 2.0%. The antagonistic correlations were r=-0.823 ± 0.011 for S₂/S₃ and r=-0.856 ± 0.026 for S₄/S₅. Because no mechanical stop or synchronized angular reference was used, these results support direction-related channel organization and repeatability, not angle calibration or continuous wrist-pose reconstruction.

中文注释

腕部定量分析使用了十人队列中的 6 名参与者,覆盖 S/M/L/XL 手套尺码。每名参与者自行控制速度完成腕部屈曲—伸展、桡偏—尺偏和前臂旋前—旋后;参与者为独立分析单位(n=6),每个运动轴预先选定的三个中央峰—峰循环作为参与者内重复。在群体层面,预设目标通道占主导:屈曲—伸展对应 S₁,桡偏—尺偏对应 S₂/S₃,旋前—旋后对应 S₄/S₅。目标通道相对离轴响应的幅值比分别为 9.68 ± 1.36、4.01 ± 0.20 和 7.44 ± 0.48;参与者层面的定义见补充方法。目标通道的幅值变异系数平均为 2.0%。S₂/S₃ 和 S₄/S₅ 的拮抗相关分别为 r=-0.823 ± 0.011 和 r=-0.856 ± 0.026。由于没有机械限位或同步角度参考,这些结果支持方向相关的通道组织和重复性,而不能证明角度标定或连续腕部姿态重建。

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Electromechanical Characterization and Validation / Comparison with Existing Hand-Tracking Systems

中文:机电表征与验证 / 与现有手部跟踪系统的比较

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TE.3、R2.3、R2.7、R2.8、R3.1
具体原因
旧稿的“<15 ms 端到端延迟”没有对应完整动作到分类测量,必须删除;117 Hz 也应改为实测 119.98 Hz。审稿人 2.8 还要求解释 0.15–1.5 mm 的实际含义,因此当前版本拆分 Z1–Z3,并把“正交特征向量”收窄为有实验支持的方向相关多通道响应。主要改动均有明确数据或审稿要求。
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审稿意见 TE.3、2.3、2.8、3.1;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L25、L69–71、Table S7 L292–293;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L65–75、L275–291、L317–321。
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ALL.tex L349

Table 文内交叉引用(tab:comparison) benchmarks HW-AVATAR platform against representative academic prototypes and commercial products. The system operates at 117 Hz with an end-to-end latency below 15 ms, comparable to commercial platforms. At the same time, it maintains a flexible hand-worn form factor because the rigid electronics are relocated to the wrist and the sensing layer remains ultrathin at 0.15–1.5 mm. Notably, the maximum thickness mainly arises in localized regions where the PET and TPU layers overlap with the hook surface of the hook-and-loop fastener. Compared with magnetic trackers such as MANUS and HaptX, which can be affected by electromagnetic environments, and with vision-based systems, which may be affected by occlusion, a resistive stretchable platform offers a complementary operating domain. The structural decoupling strategy operates at two levels: segmented PET islands constrain finger-level deformation to active sensing zones while widened interconnects suppress parasitic fluctuations, and the antagonistic wrist topology converts multi-DoF surface strains into orthogonal feature vectors. On this dataset, lightweight classifiers achieve accuracies comparable to the deep-learning baselines we tested, without recourse to a pose-regression network; a direct comparison to regression-based baselines is left to future work.

中文注释

表 I 将 HW-AVATAR 平台与代表性学术原型和商业产品进行比较。系统以 117 Hz 运行,端到端延迟低于 15 ms,与商业平台相当。同时,由于刚性电子器件移至腕部,传感层保持 0.15–1.5 mm 的超薄形态,因此仍具有柔性的手部佩戴形式。最大厚度主要出现在 PET、TPU 与魔术贴钩面重叠的局部区域。磁跟踪系统(如 MANUS 和 HaptX)可能受电磁环境影响,视觉系统可能受遮挡影响;相比之下,电阻式可拉伸平台提供了互补的适用场景。结构解耦策略包括两个层面:分段 PET 岛把手指形变限制在有效传感区,增宽互连抑制寄生波动;腕部拮抗拓扑则把多自由度表面应变转换为正交特征向量。在本数据集上,轻量级分类器取得了与所测试深度学习基线相近的准确率,无需姿态回归网络;与回归基线的直接比较留待未来工作。

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ALL.tex L347

Table 文内交叉引用(tab:comparison) benchmarks HW-AVATAR against representative academic prototypes and commercial products. The system records complete 20-channel frames at approximately 120 Hz. In a separate dual-path measurement, the ESP-NOW gateway path added a median host-arrival delay of 1.764 ms relative to direct USB delivery from the DAQ unit; this is a relative communication-delivery metric rather than a complete mechanical-event-to-classification latency. The patch has three representative local thickness zones: the nominal active TPU stack is 0.15 mm (Z1), while the measured local assembly thicknesses are approximately 1.2 mm at the PET/TPU/hook-side mounting region (Z2) and 1.5 mm at the reinforced FPC-to-TPU interface region (Z3). Compared with magnetic trackers such as MANUS and HaptX, which can be affected by electromagnetic environments, and with vision-based systems, which may be affected by occlusion, a resistive stretchable platform offers a complementary operating domain. The structural decoupling strategy operates at two levels: segmented PET islands constrain finger-level deformation to active sensing zones while widened interconnects suppress parasitic fluctuations, and the antagonistic wrist topology produces direction-dependent multi-channel signatures. On this dataset, lightweight classifiers achieve accuracies comparable to the deep-learning baselines we tested, without recourse to a pose-regression network; a direct comparison to regression-based baselines is left to future work.

中文注释

表 I 将 HW-AVATAR 与代表性学术原型和商业产品进行比较。系统以约 120 Hz 记录完整的 20 通道数据帧。在单独的双路径测量中,相对于 DAQ 单元直接通过 USB 传输,ESP-NOW 网关路径使数据到达主机的中位附加延迟为 1.764 ms;这是相对通信交付指标,不是从机械事件到分类结果的完整延迟。贴片有三个代表性局部厚度区域:活动 TPU 叠层的标称厚度为 0.15 mm(Z1);PET/TPU/魔术贴钩面安装区的实测局部装配厚度约为 1.2 mm(Z2);增强 FPC—TPU 接口区约为 1.5 mm(Z3)。磁跟踪系统(如 MANUS 和 HaptX)可能受电磁环境影响,视觉系统可能受遮挡影响;相比之下,电阻式可拉伸平台提供了互补的适用场景。结构解耦策略包括两个方面:分段 PET 岛把手指形变限制在有效传感区,增宽互连抑制寄生波动;腕部拮抗拓扑产生与方向相关的多通道响应特征。在本数据集上,轻量级分类器取得了与所测试深度学习基线相近的准确率,无需姿态回归网络;与回归基线的直接比较留待未来工作。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation

Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证

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R1.1、R1.3、R2.2、R3.4
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旧稿把允许同一参与者不同 trial 分布到不同折的协议称为“within-subject 5-fold”,容易被理解成规范的受试者内或跨用户验证。当前名称准确揭示参与者重叠,并把“cross-size evaluation”改为“descriptive analyses”,因为尺码与参与者身份混杂。与此同时,“high-quality, well-decoupled”被收窄为中性的“informative”,避免用分类结果反向证明硬件已经良好解耦。
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审稿意见 1.1、1.3、2.2;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L89–121、L199–207;中英文回复 DOCX Comments 1.1、1.3、2.2。
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L486

We hypothesize that high-quality, well-decoupled sensor data should sustain high recognition accuracy even with lightweight classifiers. To test this, we benchmarked six classifiers under both within-subject 5-fold CV and a strict Leave-One-Subject-Out (LOSO) protocol on a 48-class gesture dataset collected with the HW-AVATAR platform. We describe the data collection, model setup, and cross-size evaluation in the following.

中文注释

我们假设,高质量且良好解耦的传感数据即使采用轻量级分类器也应保持较高识别准确率。为检验这一假设,我们在 HW-AVATAR 平台采集的 48 类手势数据集上,分别采用受试者内五折交叉验证和严格的留一受试者法(LOSO),比较了六种分类器。下文介绍数据采集、模型设置和跨尺码评价。

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ALL.tex L490

We hypothesize that informative sensor signals should sustain high recognition accuracy even with lightweight classifiers. To test this, we benchmarked six classifiers under both a subject-overlapping trial-level five-fold protocol and strict Leave-One-Subject-Out (LOSO) evaluation on a 48-class gesture dataset collected with the HW-AVATAR platform. We describe the data collection, model setup, and descriptive analyses across glove-size groups in the following.

中文注释

我们假设,信息充分的传感信号即使采用轻量级分类器也应保持较高识别准确率。为检验这一假设,我们在 HW-AVATAR 平台采集的 48 类手势数据集上,分别采用允许参与者重叠的试次级五折协议和严格的留一受试者法(LOSO),比较了六种分类器。下文介绍数据采集、模型设置以及不同手套尺码组之间的描述性分析。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Participants, Data Collection, and Preprocessing

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 参与者、数据采集与预处理

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TE.2、R1.1、R1.2、R2.3
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审稿人 1.2 明确要求每名参与者每类至少采集五次重复。作者重新采集/整理出 2,400 个计划独立试次,经预定义质量控制保留 2,373 个,并用设备时间戳重新测得完整帧率。旧稿的 960 trial、两次重复、117 Hz 和“cropped”均已不再反映当前实验。
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L500

Before formal recording, each participant completed approximately 5 min of familiarization training to become accustomed to the glove and the target gestures. During data collection, to mitigate muscle fatigue, each gesture was repeated twice per participant, yielding 960 trials in total. We acknowledge that this repetition count limits the statistical power per class; to partially compensate, we also report LOSO results (Section IV-D), in which test subjects contribute no training data. Raw 20-channel sensor signals were sampled at 117 Hz, and each trial was cropped to 200 timesteps before model training.

中文注释

正式记录前,每名参与者先进行约 5 min 的熟悉训练,以适应手套和目标手势。数据采集时,为减轻肌肉疲劳,每名参与者对每类手势重复两次,共得到 960 个 trial。我们承认这一重复次数限制了每类统计效力;作为部分补偿,还报告了 LOSO 结果,其中测试参与者不贡献训练数据。原始 20 通道传感信号以 117 Hz 采样,每个 trial 在模型训练前截取为 200 个时间步。

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ALL.tex L498

After approximately 5 min of familiarization, each participant performed five independent trials per gesture, giving 2,400 planned trials. Quality control excluded 27 trials before evaluation, leaving 2,373 valid trials. The median 20-channel frame period was 8.335 ms (119.98 Hz), and each trial was resampled to 200 timesteps. Supplementary Table S5 reports the 30–120-Hz resampling analysis; it assesses classification robustness rather than sensor bandwidth.

中文注释

经过约 5 min 的熟悉后,每名参与者对每类手势完成 5 次独立 trial,共计划采集 2,400 个 trial。质量控制在评价前排除 27 个 trial,最终保留 2,373 个有效 trial。20 通道完整数据帧周期中位数为 8.335 ms(119.98 Hz),每个 trial 被重采样为 200 个时间步。Supplementary Table S5 给出了 30–120 Hz 重采样分析;该分析评估分类稳健性,而不是传感器带宽。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Benchmarking Framework and Data Representation

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 基准测试框架与数据表示

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R1.1、R1.7、R3.3、R3.4
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审稿人 1.7 和 3.3 要求补充人工时域/频域特征、降维和更可解释的基线;审稿人 1.1–1.5 又要求严格区分五折与 LOSO 并防止数据泄漏。新增内容逐项说明补充表、t-SNE 特征来源、LOSO 留出单位和所有数据依赖预处理仅在训练折拟合,均直接回应审稿意见。
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L503–L507

Six classifiers were benchmarked, including three classical machine-learning methods (KNN [26], SVM-RBF [27], and Random Forest [28]) and three learning-based methods (1D-CNN [29], GAF-CNN [30], and GAF+PCA+SVM). To accommodate their different input topologies, the 20-channel time series (resampled to 200 timesteps) were represented in three forms: (1) flattened feature vectors (Xflat ∈ ℝ^(N × 4000)) for classical classifiers; (2) raw multi-channel sequences (Xseq ∈ ℝ^(N × 20 × 200)) for the 1D-CNN; and (3) Gramian Angular Field (GAF) tensor encodings [30, 13] (XGAF ∈ ℝ^(N × 20 × 64 × 64)), which map each channel time series into a 2D angular-correlation image for 2D-CNN-based models. All models used 5-fold class-stratified CV, with normalization fitted on training folds only. Since each gesture has only two repetitions per subject, same-subject trials may share within-subject folds; we therefore treat the subject-disjoint LOSO evaluation (Section IV-D) as the primary cross-user indicator, and the within-subject numbers as an in-session upper bound.

中文注释

共比较六种分类器,包括三种传统机器学习方法(KNN、RBF 核 SVM 和随机森林)以及三种学习方法(1D-CNN、GAF-CNN 和 GAF+PCA+SVM)。为适应不同输入结构,将重采样为 200 个时间步的 20 通道时间序列表示为三种形式:(1)供传统分类器使用的展平特征向量 X_flat∈R^(N×4000);(2)供 1D-CNN 使用的原始多通道序列 X_seq∈R^(N×20×200);(3)GAF 张量编码 X_GAF∈R^(N×20×64×64),把每个通道的时间序列映射为二维角相关图像。所有模型均采用五折类别分层交叉验证,归一化只在训练折拟合。由于每名参与者每类手势只有两次重复,同一参与者的 trial 可能分布在不同折,因此将参与者隔离的 LOSO 作为主要跨用户指标,把受试者内结果视为会话内上限。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L501–L506

Six classifiers were benchmarked, including three classical machine-learning methods (KNN [26], SVM-RBF [27], and Random Forest [28]) and three learning-based methods (1D-CNN [29], GAF-CNN [30], and GAF+PCA+SVM). To accommodate their different input topologies, the 20-channel time series (resampled to 200 timesteps) were represented in three forms: (1) flattened feature vectors (Xflat ∈ ℝ^(N × 4000)) for classical classifiers; (2) raw multi-channel sequences (Xseq ∈ ℝ^(N × 20 × 200)) for the 1D-CNN; and (3) Gramian Angular Field (GAF) tensor encodings [30, 13] (XGAF ∈ ℝ^(N × 20 × 64 × 64)), which map each channel time series into a 2D angular-correlation image for 2D-CNN-based models. Supplementary Tables S3 and S4 report the handcrafted-feature, dimensionality-reduction, and channel-ablation analyses. The t-SNE visualization in Fig. 12 uses globally pooled Conv1 embeddings from a 1D-CNN, with full projection parameters provided in the Supplementary Material. All models were evaluated using both a class-stratified five-fold split at the trial level, which allowed participant overlap, and strict LOSO, which kept participants disjoint between training and testing. The five-fold results are therefore treated only as an in-distribution upper bound. In LOSO, one complete participant and all corresponding trials were held out in each of ten folds, making LOSO the primary cross-participant indicator. Normalization, PCA, ANOVA, and feature selection, when applicable, were fitted using training-fold data only. The “RF + handcrafted” configuration in Table II uses a 570-dimensional feature set comprising time-domain, frequency-domain, and cross-channel structural features.

中文注释

共比较六种分类器,包括三种传统机器学习方法(KNN、RBF 核 SVM 和随机森林)以及三种学习方法(1D-CNN、GAF-CNN 和 GAF+PCA+SVM)。为适应不同输入结构,将重采样为 200 个时间步的 20 通道时间序列表示为三种形式:(1)供传统分类器使用的展平特征向量 X_flat∈R^(N×4000);(2)供 1D-CNN 使用的原始多通道序列 X_seq∈R^(N×20×200);(3)GAF 张量编码 X_GAF∈R^(N×20×64×64),把每个通道的时间序列映射为二维角相关图像。Supplementary Tables S3 和 S4 给出人工特征、降维和通道消融分析。图 12 的 t-SNE 可视化采用 1D-CNN 第一卷积块 Conv1 特征在时间维全局池化后的表示,完整投影参数见补充材料。所有模型同时采用允许参与者重叠的试次级类别分层五折划分和训练、测试参与者完全隔离的严格 LOSO。五折结果仅视为同分布上限。LOSO 的十个折中,每次留出一名完整参与者及其全部 trial,因此 LOSO 是主要跨参与者指标。归一化、PCA、ANOVA 和特征选择如有使用,均只在训练折拟合。表 II 中“RF + handcrafted”使用 570 维特征集,包括时域、频域和跨通道结构特征。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Recognition Performance

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 识别性能

文本相似度 23.8%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

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R1.3、R1.4、R1.5
具体原因
数据集扩展到 2,373 个有效独立 trial 后,六种模型已重新训练和评价,旧稿的 98.75%、97.51%、85.86% 等结果已过时。审稿人还明确要求逐参与者变异、置信区间和统计检验,因此当前版本报告新 LOSO 结果、范围、95% CI 和 Holm 校正后的 Wilcoxon 检验,并取消“1D-CNN 显著更好”的暗示。
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审稿意见 TE.2、1.2–1.5;ALL.tex Table II L601–606;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex Table S1 L113–133;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L53–55、L113–147。
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ALL.tex L513

The classification results are summarized in II. The 1D-CNN achieved the highest accuracy of 98.75% (Kappa: 0.9873), while the SVM classifier also attained 97.51%, surpassing both GAF-based methods (95.11%–96.57%). The comparable performance of classical and deep classifiers suggests that, on this dataset, classifier choice has a smaller effect than expected; we interpret this as consistent with the signals being well-separable in the input feature space.

中文注释

分类结果汇总于表 II。1D-CNN 取得最高准确率 98.75%(Kappa:0.9873),SVM 也达到 97.51%,高于两种基于 GAF 的方法(95.11%–96.57%)。传统分类器与深度分类器表现相近,说明在该数据集上分类器选择的影响小于预期;我们将其解释为输入特征空间中的信号具有较好的可分性。

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ALL.tex L512

The classification results are summarized in II. The participant-overlapping trial-level five-fold protocol produced near-ceiling Accuracy values of 99.83%–99.96% across the six methods and is reported only as an in-distribution upper bound. Under strict LOSO, the 1D-CNN achieved pooled Accuracy/Macro-F1 of 94.99%/94.94%, followed by SVM-RBF at 94.06%/94.07%. Across the ten held-out participants, 1D-CNN Accuracy was 94.99% ± 4.18% (range: 86.67–100.00%; 95% confidence interval: 92.01–97.98%). Its participant-level advantage over SVM-RBF was not significant after Holm correction (two-sided paired Wilcoxon test, raw p=0.4258, adjusted p=1.000); the current data therefore do not establish statistical superiority over SVM-RBF.

中文注释

分类结果汇总于表 II。允许参与者重叠的试次级五折协议使六种方法都得到接近上限的 99.83%–99.96% 准确率,因此这里只将其作为同分布上限。严格 LOSO 下,1D-CNN 的汇总 Accuracy/Macro-F1 为 94.99%/94.94%,SVM-RBF 为 94.06%/94.07%。在十名留出参与者之间,1D-CNN 的准确率为 94.99% ± 4.18%(范围 86.67%–100.00%;95% 置信区间 92.01%–97.98%)。经 Holm 校正后,1D-CNN 相对 SVM-RBF 的参与者级优势不显著(双侧配对 Wilcoxon 检验,原始 p=0.4258,校正后 p=1.000);因此当前数据不能证明其在统计上优于 SVM-RBF。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Robustness Against Anthropometric Variations

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 对人体测量差异的稳健性

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R2.2
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每名参与者只佩戴一个尺码,尺码与参与者身份混杂,现有数据不能证明系统对人体测量差异具有因果意义上的稳健性。删除这一强标题并改用“Descriptive Analysis Across Glove-Size Groups”是审稿人 2.2 明确要求的主张收窄。
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审稿意见 2.2;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L199–207;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L133。
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L619

Robustness Against Anthropometric Variations

中文注释

对人体测量差异的稳健性

当前工作区版本

该版本无对应英文内容

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该版本无对应内容。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Recognition Performance

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 识别性能

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R1.4、R1.6、R1.7、R3.3、R3.4
具体原因
旧句只笼统声称“跨尺码一致性”,既没有指明证据,又受尺码—参与者混杂限制。当前段落改为列出审稿人要求新增的参与者级、类别级、降维和通道消融结果,并明确消融只能证明信息贡献,不能证明物理拓扑优越。
核查依据
审稿意见 1.4、1.6、1.7、3.3、3.4;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex Tables S1–S4、Fig. S1;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L125–173、L337–357。
审计置信度
99%
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ALL.tex L620

Cross-size consistency of the learned representation was assessed by complementary temporal and feature-space analyses.

中文注释

通过互补的时间域和特征空间分析,评估学习表示在不同尺码之间的一致性。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L514

Supplementary Tables S1–S4 and Fig. S1 provide participant-level, per-class, feature-reduction, and channel-ablation results. The ablation confirms complementary contributions from the hand and wrist–forearm channel groups, without establishing superiority over alternative layouts.

中文注释

Supplementary Tables S1–S4 和 Fig. S1 给出了参与者级、类别级、特征降维和通道消融结果。消融分析证实手部通道组与腕部—前臂通道组提供互补信息,但不能证明当前布局优于其他替代布局。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Temporal Signal Consistency (Normalized DTW Analysis)

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 时间信号一致性(归一化 DTW 分析)

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保留当前处理:原段关键内容已合并到后续综合段落
原因类别
必要的清晰度修正;章节重组与过强标题收窄
审稿意见
R2.2
具体原因
DTW 数值并未删除,而是与 Silhouette 和 t-SNE 一起合并到“Descriptive Analysis Across Glove-Size Groups”下。合并标题避免把一个受混杂因素限制的描述性指标包装成独立的“跨尺码一致性”验证,也减少过度分段。
核查依据
ALL.tex L618–621;初始提交 9005f98 L622–623;审稿意见 2.2。
审计置信度
98%
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ALL.tex L622

Temporal Signal Consistency (Normalized DTW Analysis)

中文注释

时间信号一致性(归一化 DTW 分析)

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Temporal Signal Consistency (Normalized DTW Analysis)

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 时间信号一致性(归一化 DTW 分析)

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原因类别
收窄证据边界;为十一页版面压缩并合并描述性分析
审稿意见
R2.2
具体原因
审稿人 2.2 指出尺码与参与者身份混杂,原来的独立长段容易被解读为跨尺码稳健性证明。关键 DTW 数值没有删除,而是并入后面的描述性分析;当前版还补回“数值越低表示时间对齐后波形越相似”的必要定义。
核查依据
审稿意见 2.2;ALL.tex L621;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L199–207。
审计置信度
97%
投稿版内容已删除

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ALL.tex L623

To quantify waveform mismatch across glove sizes while accounting for temporal misalignment, we computed normalized dynamic time warping (DTW) distances for the dR_ratio sequences. This dimensionless metric reflects the average cost per step along the optimal alignment path, where lower values indicate greater temporal consistency, and 0 indicates identical trajectories after alignment. The pairwise mean normalized DTW values ranged from 0.44 ± 0.15 for S–XL to 0.60 ± 0.26 for S–L. We note that the pairwise ordering (S-XL smaller than S-L) does not monotonically follow the size difference, which likely reflects the subject-level variability within each size group. This observation highlights that in the present cohort, size and subject effects are partially confounded.

中文注释

为在考虑时间错位的同时量化不同手套尺码之间的波形差异,我们计算了 dR_ratio 序列的归一化动态时间规整(DTW)距离。该无量纲指标表示最优对齐路径上的平均单位步长代价,数值越低表示时间一致性越高,0 表示对齐后的轨迹完全相同。不同尺码配对的平均归一化 DTW 值从 S–XL 的 0.44 ± 0.15 到 S–L 的 0.60 ± 0.26。配对结果并不随物理尺码差异单调变化,这可能反映各尺码组内部的参与者差异,说明当前队列中尺码效应与参与者效应部分混杂。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Descriptive Analysis Across Glove-Size Groups

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 不同手套尺码组的描述性分析

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保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
收窄证据边界;尺码因果主张收窄
审稿意见
R2.2
具体原因
旧标题直接声称特征空间已经与手套尺码“解耦”,但当前设计中每名参与者只对应一个尺码,无法分离尺码和个体身份的因果影响。当前标题只说明进行了分组描述性分析,准确符合证据边界。
核查依据
审稿意见 2.2;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L55、L133;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L199–207。
审计置信度
100%
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ALL.tex L626

Feature-Space Decoupling from Glove Size (Silhouette Analysis)

中文注释

特征空间与手套尺码的解耦(Silhouette 分析)

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L618

Descriptive Analysis Across Glove-Size Groups

中文注释

不同手套尺码组之间的描述性分析

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Descriptive Analysis Across Glove-Size Groups

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 不同手套尺码组的描述性分析

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保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
审稿人明确要求;新增关键混杂限制
审稿意见
R2.2
具体原因
这是对审稿人 2.2 的直接回应。它明确告诉读者现有队列不能把组间差异归因于尺码本身,是后续 DTW、Silhouette 和 t-SNE 结果得以保留而不被过度解释的必要前提。
核查依据
审稿意见 2.2;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L199–207;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L133。
审计置信度
100%
当前版新增

2026-04-25 投稿版

该版本无对应英文内容

中文注释

该版本无对应内容。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L619

Differences among glove-size groups were examined descriptively because glove size and participant identity are confounded.

中文注释

由于手套尺码与参与者身份相互混杂,不同尺码组之间的差异仅作描述性考察。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Feature-Space Decoupling from Glove Size (Silhouette Analysis)

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 特征空间与手套尺码的解耦(轮廓系数分析)

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保留当前处理:原段关键内容已合并到后续综合段落
原因类别
收窄证据边界;版面压缩但同时删除统计解释
审稿意见
R2.2
具体原因
审稿人 2.2 要求避免把不同参与者尺码分组解释为尺码不变性。两个轮廓系数数值仍保留在综合段落中,并补回“48 个手势簇与 4 个尺码簇的绝对值不能直接比较”这一统计限制。
核查依据
ALL.tex L621;审稿意见 2.2;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L199–207。
审计置信度
99%
投稿版内容已删除

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ALL.tex L627

A dual-label Silhouette analysis was conducted in the learned discriminative feature space. When grouped by gesture (48 clusters), the Silhouette score reached 0.6357; when grouped by glove size (4 clusters), it decreased to -0.0061. We note that Silhouette values obtained under different numbers of clusters are not directly comparable in absolute terms. Nevertheless, the sign change and the substantial difference in magnitude consistently suggest that gesture identity, rather than glove size, is the dominant organizing factor in the learned feature space.

中文注释

在学习得到的判别特征空间中进行了双标签 Silhouette 分析。按手势分组(48 个簇)时,Silhouette 得分为 0.6357;按手套尺码分组(4 个簇)时,得分降至 -0.0061。不同簇数量下得到的 Silhouette 值在绝对数值上不能直接比较。尽管如此,符号变化和幅值差异仍表明,在学习特征空间中,手势身份而不是手套尺码是主要组织因素。

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该版本无对应英文内容

中文注释

该版本无对应内容。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Manifold Visualization

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 流形可视化

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保留当前处理:原段关键内容已合并到后续综合段落
原因类别
必要的清晰度修正;十一页版面下的小标题合并
审稿意见
R2.2
具体原因
t-SNE 图和解释仍保留在合并后的尺码组描述性分析中,删除的只是单独三级标题。三个指标合并后逻辑更紧凑,也避免让描述性可视化看起来像一个独立的因果验证实验。
核查依据
ALL.tex L618–621 和 Fig. 12;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L55;审稿意见 2.2。
审计置信度
98%
投稿版内容已删除

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ALL.tex L629

Manifold Visualization

中文注释

流形可视化

当前工作区版本

该版本无对应英文内容

中文注释

该版本无对应内容。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Descriptive Analysis Across Glove-Size Groups

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 不同手套尺码组的描述性分析

文本相似度 28.7%。黄色只标出左右两版不同的词句。

修改原因与证据
修改结论
保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
事实、方法或术语纠错;描述性结果合并与因果边界修正
审稿意见
R2.2
具体原因
该段把 DTW、轮廓系数和 t-SNE 合并为描述性结果,并纠正 t-SNE 特征来源为 Conv1 全局池化表示。修改直接回应审稿人 2.2 对尺码与参与者混杂的质疑;同时保留 DTW 的解释和不同聚类数下轮廓系数不可直接比较的限制,避免过度解读。
核查依据
SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex L55;ALL.tex Fig. 12 图注及 L621;审稿意见 2.2;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L199–207。
审计置信度
100%
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L630

To qualitatively examine cross-size consistency, t-SNE was applied to the feature embeddings extracted from the fourth layer of the benchmark 1D-CNN. As shown in Fig. 12, gesture classes form compact and well-separated clusters in the projected space. When the same embedding is recolored by glove size, samples from S/M/L/XL gloves largely overlap within individual gesture clusters, and no obvious size-dominant sub-clusters are observed. This trend is consistent with the quantitative Silhouette analysis and indicates that glove size has a limited effect on the overall feature organization.

中文注释

为定性考察跨尺码一致性,对基准 1D-CNN 第四层提取的特征嵌入进行 t-SNE 投影。如图 12 所示,手势类别在投影空间中形成紧凑且分离良好的簇。用手套尺码对同一嵌入重新着色后,S/M/L/XL 样本在各手势簇内大体重叠,没有明显由尺码主导的子簇。该趋势与定量 Silhouette 分析一致,表明手套尺码对总体特征组织的影响有限。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L621

Lower normalized dynamic time warping values indicate greater waveform similarity after temporal alignment. The distances ranged from 0.44 ± 0.15 for S–XL to 0.60 ± 0.26 for S–L, with no monotonic relation to physical size difference. The learned feature space produced Silhouette scores of 0.6357 by gesture and -0.0061 by glove size. Because these scores use 48 gesture clusters and 4 glove-size clusters, respectively, their absolute values are not directly comparable. In Fig. 12, Conv1 embeddings likewise cluster mainly by gesture, with glove sizes intermingled within many neighborhoods. These descriptive analyses indicate stronger organization by gesture in this cohort; causal size effects require paired same-participant, multi-size testing.

中文注释

归一化动态时间规整值越低,表示时间对齐后的波形越相似。该距离从 S–XL 的 0.44 ± 0.15 到 S–L 的 0.60 ± 0.26,且与物理尺码差异不存在单调关系。学习特征空间按手势分组和按手套尺码分组时的轮廓系数分别为 0.6357 和 -0.0061。由于两者分别使用 48 个手势簇和 4 个尺码簇,其绝对值不能直接比较。图 12 中,Conv1 特征也主要按手势聚集,不同尺码在许多局部邻域内相互混合。这些描述性分析表明,在当前队列中,特征组织与手势的关系更强;要判断尺码的因果效应,需要同一参与者完成多尺码配对测试。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Cross-Subject Generalization via LOSO Evaluation

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 基于 LOSO 的跨参与者泛化评价

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保留当前工作区版本
原因类别
审稿人要求并新增实验;更新LOSO结果和不确定性边界
审稿意见
R1.1、R1.3、R1.4、R1.5、R2.2
具体原因
这是扩展到 2,373 个有效试次后重新执行严格 LOSO 得到的新结果,并加入训练折内预处理、参与者级波动和统计比较。它直接回应审稿人对跨参与者泛化、个体差异和尺码混杂的批评;旧稿没有这组新结果。
核查依据
审稿意见 1.1–1.5、2.2;ALL.tex Table II;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex Table S1;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L89–147、L199–207。
审计置信度
100%
当前版新增

2026-04-25 投稿版

该版本无对应英文内容

中文注释

该版本无对应内容。

当前工作区版本

ALL.tex L624

LOSO held out one complete participant and fitted all data-dependent preprocessing on the remaining participants. As summarized in Table II, the 1D-CNN reached 94.99% pooled Accuracy, with a mean participant-level Accuracy of 94.99% ± 4.18% across the LOSO folds (86.67–100.00%). Its advantage of 0.92 percentage points over SVM-RBF was not significant after Holm correction. The accuracy decreases from five-fold evaluation to LOSO confirm that participant-overlapping results are only an in-distribution upper bound. These results support multi-size cohort coverage, not a causal glove-size effect or continuous motion reconstruction.

中文注释

LOSO 每次留出一名完整参与者,所有数据依赖的预处理只在其余参与者上拟合。如表 II 所示,1D-CNN 的汇总准确率为 94.99%,十个 LOSO 折的参与者级准确率均值为 94.99% ± 4.18%(范围 86.67%–100.00%)。它相对 SVM-RBF 高 0.92 个百分点,但经 Holm 校正后差异不显著。五折评价到 LOSO 的准确率下降说明,允许参与者重叠的结果只能视为同分布上限。这些结果支持在所测试的多尺码队列中使用统一分类器,但不能证明手套尺码的因果效应或连续动作重建能力。

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Cross-Subject Generalization via LOSO Evaluation

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 基于 LOSO 的跨参与者泛化评价

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保留当前处理:原段关键内容已合并到后续综合段落
原因类别
事实、方法或术语纠错;实验设计事实错误删除
审稿意见
R1.1、R2.2
具体原因
旧句声称同一参与者佩戴了不同手套尺码,但当前实验实际是每名参与者只分配一个尺码。该说法与补充表 S1 和审稿回复中确认的实验设计冲突,必须删除。当前版本已用“每折留出一名完整参与者及其全部 trial”准确描述 LOSO。
核查依据
SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex Table S1 和 L133;审稿意见 2.2;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L199–207。
审计置信度
100%
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L633

We further conducted a Leave-One-Subject-Out (LOSO) evaluation over the ten independent participants, with trials from the same participant wearing different glove sizes merged into one subject group to ensure strictly subject-disjoint partitioning.

中文注释

我们进一步对 10 名独立参与者进行了留一受试者法(LOSO)评价,并把同一参与者佩戴不同手套尺码得到的 trial 合并到同一个受试者组中,以确保严格的受试者隔离划分。

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中文注释

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Gesture Recognition and Data Quality Validation / Cross-Subject Generalization via LOSO Evaluation

中文:手势识别与数据质量验证 / 基于 LOSO 的跨参与者泛化评价

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修改原因与证据
修改结论
保留当前处理:原段关键内容已合并到后续综合段落
原因类别
审稿人要求并新增实验;删除过时结果和未经检验的机制解释
审稿意见
R1.1、R1.3、R1.5、R2.2
具体原因
该段全部核心数值来自原来每类两次重复、960 trial 的旧数据集。按照审稿人要求扩展到每类五次并重新评价后,1D-CNN LOSO 已变为 94.99%,SVM-RBF 为 94.06%,五折到 LOSO 的降幅也变为 4.97 和 5.82 个百分点。保留旧段会造成直接数值冲突,其中关于 GAF 退化机制的推断也没有独立因果证据。
核查依据
审稿意见 1.2、1.3;ALL.tex Table II L601–606;RESPONSE_TO_REVIEWERS_ZH.md L89–121;SUPPLEMENTARY_MATERIAL.tex Table S1。
审计置信度
100%
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2026-04-25 投稿版

ALL.tex L635

As summarized in Table II, the 1D-CNN achieves 85.86% accuracy under LOSO, representing a 12.9-percentage-point decrease from its within-subject accuracy of 98.75%, yet it remains the best performer, closely followed by the SVM (85.14%). Notably, the SVM exhibits the smallest cross-subject drop among all methods (-12.4 pp), indicating that kernel-based classification on flattened temporal features generalizes particularly robustly across users. In contrast, the image-based encodings (GAF+PCA+SVM and GAF-CNN) suffer the largest degradation (-20.0 pp and -19.3 pp, respectively), suggesting that the angular-correlation representation amplifies subject-specific resistance magnitude differences that are less invariant across users. In all cross-subject runs the test subject provided no training samples and no per-subject pre-processing was applied. The fact that both the 1D-CNN and the SVM sustain accuracy above 85% on fully unseen participants is consistent with the intended design: structure-driven physical decoupling, combined with size-graded substrates, is associated with signals whose cross-user discriminative content degrades only moderately under LOSO in the present cohort. We note, however, that size and subject effects are partially confounded in the current cohort, since each glove size is worn by a disjoint subset of participants. Reaching roughly 85% LOSO accuracy without user-specific calibration narrows, but does not fully close, the gap toward deployment on unseen users. The current evaluation is further restricted to 48 discrete gestures, and continuous joint-angle regression together with larger-cohort generalization remain open directions.

中文注释

如表 II 所示,1D-CNN 在 LOSO 下的准确率为 85.86%,比受试者内准确率 98.75% 下降 12.9 个百分点,但仍为最佳模型,SVM 以 85.14% 紧随其后。SVM 在所有方法中跨受试者降幅最小(-12.4 个百分点),说明基于展平时间特征的核分类具有较强跨用户泛化能力。相比之下,GAF+PCA+SVM 和 GAF-CNN 分别下降 20.0 和 19.3 个百分点,可能表明角相关表示放大了不易跨用户保持不变的参与者特异性电阻幅值差异。所有跨受试者实验中,测试参与者不提供训练样本,也不进行参与者特定预处理。1D-CNN 和 SVM 在完全未见参与者上均保持 85% 以上准确率,与设计目标一致:结构驱动的物理解耦和分尺码基底与跨用户判别信息仅中等下降相关。不过,当前队列中尺码与参与者效应部分混杂,因为每个尺码由不同参与者子集佩戴。约 85% 的无用户特定标定 LOSO 准确率缩小但尚未消除面向新用户部署的差距。当前评价还仅限于 48 类离散手势,连续关节角回归和更大队列泛化仍是后续方向。

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This paper presented HW-AVATAR, a structurally decoupled, ultrathin, and size-adaptive 20-channel liquid-metal soft sensing glove. First, segmented strain-limiting islands on the fingers, together with an antagonistic wrist-forearm topology, isolate major finger and wrist degrees of freedom at the mechanical level, providing a physical basis for reduced inter-channel coupling. Second, a 150 μm TPU heterogeneous multilayer, fabricated by scalable screen printing and thermal lamination and reinforced by an annular FPC interface with secondary polyimide encapsulation, yields a lightweight (<45 g) wearable of 0.15 to 1.5 mm thickness with a durable hard-soft interface. Third, on a 48-class dataset from ten participants wearing four glove sizes, a lightweight classifier (1D-CNN) achieved 98.75% within-subject and 85.86% Leave-One-Subject-Out accuracy without user-specific recalibration, while complementary Silhouette, DTW, and t-SNE analyses indicate limited size-dependent feature drift within the tested cohort. Future work will extend to continuous hand-pose regression with online domain adaptation, integrate complementary modalities such as DIP sensing and forearm EMG, and deploy the platform in sign-language translation, post-stroke rehabilitation, and dexterous teleoperation.

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本文提出 HW-AVATAR,一种结构解耦、超薄、尺寸自适应的 20 通道液态金属软体传感手套。第一,手指上的分段限应变岛与腕部—前臂拮抗拓扑在机械层面隔离主要手指和腕部自由度,为降低通道间耦合提供物理基础。第二,采用可规模化丝网印刷和热压制造的 150 μm TPU 异质多层结构,并通过环形 FPC 接口和二次聚酰亚胺封装进行增强,形成重量低于 45 g、厚度 0.15–1.5 mm、具有耐用软硬接口的可穿戴装置。第三,在十名参与者佩戴四种手套尺码形成的 48 类数据集上,轻量级 1D-CNN 在无需用户特定重新标定的情况下取得 98.75% 受试者内准确率和 85.86% LOSO 准确率;Silhouette、DTW 和 t-SNE 分析表明,在测试队列中尺码相关特征漂移有限。未来将扩展到结合在线域适应的连续手部姿态回归,集成 DIP 感知和前臂 EMG 等互补模态,并将平台用于手语翻译、中风后康复和灵巧遥操作。

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HW-AVATAR combines a 20-channel liquid-metal sensing layout, segmented strain-limiting islands, and an antagonistic wrist topology for discrete hand and wrist gesture classification. In experiments with ten participants, each performing five independent trials per gesture across 48 gesture classes, the 1D-CNN achieved 94.99% Accuracy under strict LOSO, without a significant participant-level advantage over SVM-RBF. The results support a unified classifier across the tested multi-size cohort and complementary contributions from the hand and wrist–forearm channel groups. Continuous motion reconstruction and causal size invariance require external kinematic ground truth and paired multi-size experiments. Future work should also evaluate additional independently fabricated PET-control specimens, larger cohorts and cross-session recordings, and DIP-specific sensing.

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HW-AVATAR 将 20 通道液态金属传感布局、分段限应变岛和腕部拮抗拓扑结合起来,用于离散的手部和腕部手势分类。在十名参与者的实验中,每名参与者对 48 类手势中的每一类完成五次独立试次;1D-CNN 在严格 LOSO 下取得 94.99% 的准确率,但在参与者层面相对 SVM-RBF 没有显著优势。结果支持在所测试的多尺码队列中采用统一分类器,也支持手部通道组与腕部—前臂通道组具有互补贡献。连续运动重建和尺码因果不变性需要外部运动学真值以及同一参与者的多尺码配对实验。未来工作还应增加独立制造的 PET 对照试样,扩大参与者队列并开展跨会话记录,并增加 DIP 专用感知。

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